Mirror Blossoms

By FallenSky

Crystal Mirror,
Burning bright,
Tell me,
Will my
Blossoms burn tonight?
For to Blossom burning,
Is to Blossom
Without light

Crystal Mirror,
Shining bright,
Tell me,
Tell me
Will I Blossom in the night?
Bury my Blossoms
In the night?
Tell me,
Will my lilacs
Burn tonight?

Crystal Mirror,
Shard of night,
Show me,
Show me
All my Blossoms
Blooming bright.
For to Blossom at night,
Is to Blossom,
Without your light.

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Copyright 2003 CrestFallenSky
Published on Friday, January 24, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Silent Meadow On Sunday, December 27, 2009, Silent Meadow (10)By person wrote:

    this one goes to the favs

  • A former member wrote: interesting.

  • CharlottesWeb On Friday, May 23, 2003, CharlottesWeb (521)By person wrote:

    Oh wow... how steadily you kept the feeling. It only dawned on me what this was all about on the very three lines. Then I went over it again, and again...and was again...stunned. You are so creative. You make you points with natures small subtlys and they

  • CharlottesWeb On Friday, May 23, 2003, CharlottesWeb (521)By person wrote:

    and they come out shinning.~DW~

  • DoctorAsh On Monday, May 5, 2003, DoctorAsh (389)By person wrote:

    i love the last stanza . An eye opener, had to go back and read it again to comprehend the complexity of it's wording . Beautiful type

  • manywalks On Sunday, March 23, 2003, manywalks (772)By person wrote:

    Loved the flow and feling this instilled, as always an honor.

  • A former member wrote: This is nice and wonderfully worded.

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