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Spinning
By The_Scavenger
Spinning sky
Spinning Ground
Spinning, spinning all around
Down I fall
I hit the ground
Sky still spinning
Chest is bleeding
All is dark
Then I hear that deadly sound
Of that snipers round.
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Copyright 2003 The_Scavenger
Published on Monday, December 8, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Spinning"
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A former member wrote:
quick, short, effective. nice
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On Saturday, December 13, 2003, Rebel_Angel
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wrote:
oh dear, having second thoughts I see...maybe... Well this is a nice write, and yes it is good u posted more!
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On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
hmm are u have second thoughts deary? the poem its self itsnt bad simple short gets the point to the reader. *side note bout time u got new stuff up!
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