ALONE

By Qwendragoness

I pull back into the mists of my mind
My heart sinks deep in my chest
Broken, shattered, attempting to heal
I resign that I do not want to feel
The scars of my wounds turn to bone
The light in me shielded from view
I journey through life
Seeking out meaning in the abyss
Stumbling through the dark
Yearning for the unattainable touch
I give up my foolish quest
And freefall in the darkness
Of my emotion
This solitude an odd comfort
And in this comfort my realization is made
As in life
We are in death
Alone

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Copyright 2003 Qwendragoness
Published on Tuesday, October 7, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • 13sonsofgod On Sunday, August 25, 2019, 13sonsofgod (748)By person wrote:

    Alone indeed...we are....and far away from the lies and deceit of others, welcome to my world....very well done here........13

  • Silver Spectre On Saturday, August 24, 2019, Silver Spectre (84)By person wrote:

    I am glad to see that your writing received a long overdue recognition from the sites other poets. I would like to see more from my friend. Closer than most friends I have ever had. In Darkness we find a Planeterization of a mystery we have brought ourselves to. Which way to shine a light in its gravity and history is a journey just for one. This was well spoken and with truthful words that bloom. I wonder what you found there.

  • BloodPoet On Wednesday, June 5, 2013, BloodPoet (75)By person wrote:

    I feel like you captured my emotions better than I can. Great job.

  • Blood of Winter On Monday, June 7, 2004, Blood of Winter (300)By person wrote:

    well done, I love the meloncholy ending that just jumps out with soft whispers of nothingness...

  • A former member wrote: tight,,,all i can say is tight

  • urbanhumility On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, urbanhumility (1205)By person wrote:

    sweetly despondant, concise to a great point, you have spoken well here.......urban

  • CharlottesWeb On Sunday, October 12, 2003, CharlottesWeb (521)By person wrote:

    Oh!! I do love this one! I could spend quite a while picking out every secret behind ever line of this one...not to mention those between. You write in a unique way...that is very much like my own. Lol..funny way to put it huh? Well, this is a fantastic p

  • CharlottesWeb On Sunday, October 12, 2003, CharlottesWeb (521)By person wrote:

    fantastic peice. ~JMDW~

  • Drea On Friday, October 10, 2003, Drea (1516)By person wrote:

    nothing i say can match what it made me feel. i agree with fallen. ~Drea~

  • The Fallen Angel On Thursday, October 9, 2003, The Fallen Angel (245)By person wrote:

    Can we say beautiful? Yes we can because it is a write of greatness+Fallen One+

  • Delilah On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, Delilah (115)By person wrote:

    We all feel alone sometimes...this was good, I like...~Delilah~

  • Qwendragoness On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, Qwendragoness (12)By person wrote:

    thank you all

  • streetpoet On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, streetpoet (25)By person wrote:

    Wonderfuly written. It creates a type of image that makes sadness and isolation seem beautiful

  • Silver Spectre On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, Silver Spectre (84)By person wrote:

    Very good. And of course I can't wait to see your next. ~silver

  • Qwendragoness On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, Qwendragoness (12)By person wrote:

    thanks

  • Lydia Jade On Sunday, October 12, 2003, Lydia Jade (1482)By person wrote:

    it seems we have alot in common! ~Blood~

  • Qwendragoness On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, Qwendragoness (12)By person wrote:

    i will as soon as i get some finished

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