The Prince's Gift of Suicide

By Aernor

The moment the razor's song of blood
slipped his heart's strings
and carved his mind's hesitation.
The liquid death caressed
rosy cheeks and promised liberty.
The feeling of demons piercing his soul
and silencing sacred prayers of salvation,
sold to the Prince of Darkness.
His cries ripped the pure
and horrified the living.
His beautiful face,
twisted
traumatized
by Hell's kiss.

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Copyright 2012 Aernor
Published on Thursday, March 8, 2012.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Painting with words a picture both generally psychologically horrific and sinfuly alluring. A brilliant work.

  • QuartzAl18 On Friday, November 23, 2012, QuartzAl18 (21)By person wrote:

    Horrific and sci fi like scare that portrays gory images that play over & over in my head

  • Magdalena On Thursday, March 8, 2012, Magdalena (614)By person wrote:

    This reads like an intro to an excellent novel, I would read the book...... Welcome to DP.

  • Aernor On Thursday, March 8, 2012, Aernor (11)By person wrote:

    Awesome idea! thanks

  • Devilish On Thursday, March 8, 2012, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    DAMN!! the last line sent chills down my spine.. I dont normally do this but i posted something today on suicide.. a very sensitive subject.. dont go anywhere. welcome to darkpoetry.. if you eva need anything i'm a click away.. i refer you to check out my post.. its called his eyes hid suicide... dont be a stranger.. Scholar

  • Aernor On Thursday, March 8, 2012, Aernor (11)By person wrote:

    I read the poem you wrote. So sad. Makes you think about what you say to people cause u never know in what state they are at that very moment.

  • Aernor On Thursday, March 8, 2012, Aernor (11)By person wrote:

    wow, thanks! =]

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