Empty

By Audrey_Star

mad sympathy
of
silhouette impressions.
I feel raw
like I
could break the sculpture
of junk in black ink.

The pain saw a rigid death
“not here”
it told the boy
who, through red water, never left.

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Published on Saturday, June 7, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "Empty"

On Friday, June 15, 2012, Melancholic VIncent (429) wrote:

I really liked this one, even though i didn't understand the underline message, sorry :\ But i like the way it's written
On Monday, May 4, 2009, Morbid_insanity (75) wrote:

i loved the way you opened this, the flow was awesome. the rest was good too, i just really liked that part
On Saturday, May 1, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246) wrote:

I agree with walks.. so raw. made me go all arggh arggh.. and scratch my claws on the wall .. good one. love the ending line
A former member wrote: "who, through red water, never left" ooooh, v-e-r-y visual, I like the picture this splattered in m mind.
On Saturday, June 7, 2003, manywalks (750) wrote:

Loved the raw taste and flow of this, thanks. ~ mw