Comments by Six-Out
- "This one had a fractured feel to it. Like there were cracks in the surface, barely letting us see what's hidden underneath. Write more, let us see what's there."
Posted by Six-Out on "hourglass" by Meshell
- "The style of writing Ian's the subtle rhyme scheme is odd, but not bad. I like the way it flowed with a studder, almost like someone in the situation trying to quietly speak it out. This is a good piece."
Posted by Six-Out on "Mindsweeper" by Meshell
- "This is actually very good. I love the way it flows, I just wish it were longer, because I could read with that beat for a bit longer. Good job."
Posted by Six-Out on "It wasn't you" by letitbe
- "This was sublime. The way you bring it all together to such a nailbiter of an ending is remarkable. I loved the wordplay, the way you made the metaphors yours. Overall, wonderful piece."
Posted by Six-Out on "to exist " by Beautiful Incidental
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