Comments by All Members
- "Positively oozing with visuals and creative doorways. The rhythm was a wonderful mixture of several different styles which i applaud you for getting your hands dirty and writing what you feel until it comfortably winds together. I look forward to more. "
Posted by sIo on "How can I speak without a mouth" by Jonas Robinson
- "Man Jonas! You are a beast of poet! And I mean that in the best possible way😀 I love the feel and detail of your poems. As one reads, it is like you are there experiencing it for yourself. You have a gift !"
Posted by Hope in despair on "In the waiting" by Jonas Robinson
- "without consequence, we shall either burn with our bodies being licked by flames, or rot away in our graves as the earth decays our body. love and death are twins, though death resents love because love is universally accepted and practiced, while death is consumed by the rejection of society because like many of us, it is often misunderstood. so when given the chance, it lashes out, exemplifying a powerful rage. this is my interpretation of your wondrous piece."
Posted by VERITAS OMOIKANE on "Burn Burn Burn" by Jonas Robinson
- "You can feel the vulnerability of a rose There's something about the hidden effects of a word or phrase that adds to a poems power The sonic power of symbol or metaphor beyond narrative or style; although all critical"
Posted by zebra black on "Where are we?" by Jonas Robinson
- "I like the way you use the rose
Is it not metaphorically innocence, romance and the hidden …..Joyce used it often ie the fallen rose"
Posted by zebra black on "Where are we?" by Jonas Robinson
- "This was a really interesting piece to read. I get the sense that someone tried so hard to pull someone out of their own self-inflicted, self-insisted disaster and despite those efforts it was blown along with the breeze, carefree but stuck to themselves, leaving those in their wake sad and exhausted. Interesting read, nicely done :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "Wonders of" by Jonas Robinson
- "Oh wow I really really enjoyed this. It struck all the right nerves and that last stanza really left me pondering "what comes next?" When it's "night forever" and the world is no longer your oyster, who will create a spark to see what comes? Very nicely done throughout, thank you for sharing!"
Posted by Dilated View on "Where are we?" by Jonas Robinson
- "I found this interesting as a sort of back and forth between love and death. The analogies throughout helped keep the flow going in a way that kept me off balance but on track from line to line. Really cool imagery :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "Burn Burn Burn" by Jonas Robinson
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