Comments by Forgotten Angel
- "yes...you do have talent..and you should POST MORE! hint hint! lol thats why ur on my favs, ur a great writer! and a good person..of course..."
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "To Love a Machine" by DarkSoul
- "wow...ur such an amazing storyteller! who knew?! confused on some parts, some stupid lil errors that aren't worth fixing..but jeez, dude, you did great!!! so proud of you! this is awesome! great work! -Kel"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "To Love a Machine" by DarkSoul
- "sounds familiar...lol good one..n i agree w/ crimson..way too long..good to have ya back 2 posting..n also agree w/ her yay irish drinking -Kel"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "Whiskey In the Jar" by DarkSoul
- "i have nothing constructive to say, jus that this has struck me..in a way nothing else has..not sure if its a good or bad.."
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "Tell Me" by DarkSoul
- "to talk to me...and put up with me, hun..you have to have all the patience in the world..which you do...cuz im jus a crazy bitch lol -Kel"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "Patience-A Haiku" by DarkSoul
- "oh jesus...*grabs a tissue and wipes her eyes* please dont do that...i need you for one..and me n crimson truly do love you..*gives you a huge bear hug* love you! -Kel"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "Lascerate pt. 1" by DarkSoul
- "i never had any faith in the world, not since i was lil..great write..another reason ur on my favs list! :P awesome write, it kicks major ass! -Kel"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "Faith" by DarkSoul
- "it really sucks, i agree w/ Angel..it really does..great write..hope to run into ya soon on here, and great poetry..i love it..welcome 2 my fav's list! -Kel"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "Scorn" by DarkSoul
- "i dont like people who dont see what their bf\gf really is and you try 2 tell them cuz u wanna look out for them cuz u love them\still love them.. -Kel"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "Listen" by DarkSoul
- "speechless..fantastic..beautiful...wonderfull! All my scars-inside and out are alive to memories..fantastic write! -Kel"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "I" by DarkSoul
- "ima comment again..this is the best work i've seen..and wow..it gets me in the heart..i used 2 feel like that..now i've give up hope..but you better not give up cuz she's out there somewhere for you -Kel"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "Deprived" by DarkSoul
- "thats a really good poem..and a lot of good ?s..i thought like that once..ran away 2 my grandparents garage (JiNx knows which one im talkin bout) but i was found bout an hr later..:) but..dont run away, people care about you even though they may not show "
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "If I Died Tonight" by DarkSoul
- "i can relate..this is a really good poem..i wish i could write like you! -Kel (ps..whoever she is, shes a bitch for hurting you) sry..had 2 add that :P"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "Apothocary" by DarkSoul
- "great write, great poet too! i love your work already, and you can feel the emotion, fantastic write -story"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "Deprived" by DarkSoul
