To Love a Machine
By DarkSoul
Max rubbed the sleep from his eyes as he got out of bed. Well, what passed
as a bed. The mattress had lumps and the sheets had holes. A piece of plywood
would have made a better bed. He slapped the alarm clock next to him to
stop that annoying buzz. The clock flashed five o'clock.
"Dim lights on.” Max said.
The lights came on at about fifty percent of total power. Max looked around
the room for a clean set of clothes. He was going to need them when he
delivered the child support check to his ex-wife, Michelle. He found a
pair of tattered jeans and a stained, but clean, tank top. He put the clothes
on and went to the bathroom.
The bathroom was as dirty as the rest of the small, dingy apartment. It
had towels strewn about and the rust stains
were disgusting. Max finished the rest of his morning routine by brushing
his teeth, deciding not to shave or comb his tangle of black hair, washing
his face and using the toilet.
Then he went to the fridge for breakfast. As he opened the fridge he also
turned on Jennifer IV, his pride and joy. It was custom built computer
and was equipped with voice identification, speech patterns, ocular senses,
a fast processor of ninety gigahertz, and forty gigabytes of RAM, holographic
3-D viewing screen, blistering fast CommStream access, and all the other
bells and whistles that went with top of the line computers. The most important
feature, though, was its AI, real artificial intelligence. It was portable
as well, you just clipped the microchip in the base of the processor case
to a WristLink and you had yourself a portable Jennifer IV. He had the
WristLink as well.
It was the only thing in his apartment that was worth anything; it was
probably worth more than his life. Max knew the how much his life was worth,
about five hundred dollars every couple of weeks. He was a Retriever, one
of those poor souls that happened to be good at finding things, people,
pets, and money. Like a bounty hunter, only bounty hunters get paid more
often and go after fugitives. Retrievers work in a much broader sense,
they could get anything; you name it and Retrievers could get it for you,
for a price, of course. Everything had a price tag on this world. Max knew
the price for everything, well the price to find everything. The computer
chimed on.
“Good morning Max,” said a warm, sensual female voice from his computer.
“It's five thirty on a Friday morning. The weather outside is cold and
the sun isn't up yet.”
“Good morning Jennifer,” Max responded to his computer. The warm, female
voice was the reason the computer was named Jennifer. “What's in the
news today?”
“Well, Earth was bombed again by the Convention of Eight.” Jennifer
told him.
The Convention of Eight was an intergalactic alliance of eight galaxies
consisting of about eighty planets. Although it was mostly entire galaxies
that joined single planets were also eligible of acceptance. All of the
planets of the Milky Way galaxy had joined except for Earth. One of its
super powers refused to be apart of a group that was more powerful than
itself. The name of that organization was the American Alliance, a single
country that ruled four of Earth's seven continents. The American Alliance
also had other allies in other parts of the world, but they didn't really
matter. Max's ex-wife and only child lived in the middle of the American
Alliance. In a place called Goodfaith, North Dakota.
“What part?” I asked, a little concerned.
“Washington D.C., the capital. Don't worry Max, Beth's fine.” Jennifer
answered.
Max knew Jennifer IV was right, but he was still worried about his ex-wife.
Beth had left him for another man while he was on a mission for a high
paying customer. He had found her in bed with another man; thankfully her
boyfriend was no one Max knew. If it had it would have gotten real bloody.
As it was, Beth was the kind of girl who was strong willed and got what
she wanted. She would have survived the attack just through stubbornness.
Although she was gone Max still missed her. His feelings had never faded
in the first place.
“Alright, I'm going out see if I have any new assignments.” Max said
as he walked over to Jennifer IV.
He reached around the back and slid the chip out of the socket it was resting
in and into his WristLink. He flicked a switch on the side and a voice
came on.
“Do you know how it feels to be able to talk and have no body? I'll tell
you how. It feels really creepy!” Jennifer IV said from Max's WristLink.
“Do you want me to turn you off? All it takes it the flip of a switch.
I'll do it too.” Max threatened. He never would have followed through
though, Jennifer was too much a partner/girlfriend for him to be that mean.
“You wouldn't dare, you scoundrel. You love me too much.” Jennifer
began to calm down. She was usually pretty high-strung when she was on
the WristLink. Jennifer described it as how a person would describe an
out-of-body and floating around kind of dream. In short it was very unsettling.
“You're right.” Max said, smiling to himself as he went over to the
closet. He pulled out a leather jacket and two shoulder holsters. He tossed
the jacket on his bed and strapped the holsters on. After strapping the
holsters on, he went to his bed and pulled out from underneath two gray
boxes. He opened them and inside the box were two Preyfire pistols.
Preyfire had been the leading name in home defense laser technology. They
had been top of the line when they had first been developed on his home
planet of Solthen. Unfortunately the company went out of business twenty
years back when an off-world company had developed anti-matter weapons.
Lasers were beams of focused light that are extremely accurate. The only
flaw with them was that they needed to be recharged after about fifty shots.
This tended to be a big draw back during heated combat when the recharge
time was close to two minutes.
Anti-matter worked a little differently. Anti-matter weapons worked with
bullets just like the firearms that were used on Earth. The only difference
was that the amount of anti-matter used was very small compared with the
size of the bullet's slug. In truth the amount of anti-matter was so small
that electron microscopes were needed to see the amount of anti-matter
needed to make a bullet. Anti-matter was powerful stuff, a quarter of a
gram could easily annihilate a small city. It was also dangerous to transport
because if it came into contact with anything the anti-matter would annihilate,
and yes that is the scientific term used to describe what anti-matter does.
How does a person carry it you ask? You don't, you seal it in a vacuum
and use magnets to suspend it in mid-air. The shells themselves are pretty
little things. They're metal bases with glass domes. The domes are what
actually house the anti-matter and the magnets. When the glass breaks,
so does the vacuum. Boom. Anti-matter was one nasty weapon and it soon
eclipsed lasers as the weapon of choice among military and police forces
on many worlds.
“Max, you really need to get new clothes. The ones you have now are all
ratty and stained.” Jennifer said, scanning Max's clothes with her ocular
sensors.
“Where do you suggest that we get the money? I'm having a tough enough
time as it is.” Max said, looking at his clothes.
“Well, get another job.” Jennifer suggested, trying to be as helpful
as possible.
Max just grunted and headed to for the door of his apartment. The door
was made of steel and it slid on a track to open when Max pressed his palm
against a metallic identification pad. The corridor that the door opened
into was the kind that one would expect to be a haven for drug use and
the oldest profession. The walls were stained with the grime of years of
neglect and had paint peeling from it in patches, not to mention the holes
that infrequently dotted the walls. Although Max lived here, he was uncomfortable
in the hallways. He had to use both hands to count the number of times
he had almost been mugged. He continued to walk briskly, every once in
a while glancing over his shoulder, until he came to the elevator.
The elevator was well ventilated, but not in the conventional sense. The
doors were peppered with bullet holes and laser holes. Gangs were not unheard
of either in this complex and ambushes during gang wars were frequent and
often incured the deaths of many innocent people.
“Some of those look new Jennifer. What do you think darling? Should we
risk it?” Max asked, truly looking to his computer for advice.
“Take the stairs. They're better for your health. I want you to live
forever honey,” Jennifer said, “and you don't live to long if you're
old and fat.”
“Selfish little girl aren't you?” Max laughed, as he turned to his
right and continued down a hallway much like the he had come from.
His journey ended when he came to a stairwell. The sign that was crookedly
hung above the doorway said that he was on the fifteenth floor. The stairs
weren't deadly so to speak, just a little poorly lit and dilapidated and
crawling with gang members and drug pushers and rats and freaks and other
things that shouldn't be mentioned. Max reached into his jacket and snapped
the holsters open, making it easier to get at his only means of protection.
“Max, you might want to go back home and get yourself a knife.”
“Jennifer, I sold my last knife so that I could pay for rent so that
we could have a place to live. Business hasn't really been that great.”
“Oh, yeah. Sorry.”
“Don't worry about it. Just keep an eye out for me will ya?”
Max carefully stepped out on to the first landing, hoping that it wouldn't
give way and send him crashing to his death fifteen stories below. Such
things did happen. It seemed sturdy enough so he continued on. The going
was slow because he checked each step as went to make sure that it would
hold his weight. He was about half way down the first flight of stairs
when Jenifer alerted him to the people on the landing below. Gang members
that often required some kind of toll. Max decided that he would pay in
lasers if anything happened. The gangsters looked to be about as tall as
Max was and about twice as heavy. Unfortunately for them it was all muscle
and no brain. They were dressed in black, gray and blue, and each carried
either a knife or an old fashioned firearm called a pistol.
“Hey mun, ware yous tink you goin' hunh?” the leader said as Max came
to the last step, “You goin' noware if yous don't pay up to old Razor
and yer jacket look real good.”
Max braced himself and spoke, “Listen pal, I got nothing to give you.
If I did I wouldn't be living here. So step aside, let me through and be
civil.” Max looked around as he talked. Old Razor seemed to have about
four of his ugliest friends with him.
“Ah donah tinks yous gets it mun. Yous gots ta pay me.” Razor said,
drawing a knife.
Max's hands went to the inside of his jacket and withdrew his Preyfires
and aimed both barrels at the leader's head. “I can either pay you with
laser fire or you can let me go. Your choice.”
Just before he finished his last sentence Max saw a flash of movement in
the corner of his eye. He spun to his right and avoided a soaring knife
that would have caught him in the throat. Max let fly with both barrels.
When the fight was over Razor was dead and so were three of his fellows.
The forth man most likely wouldn't see the next day. Max almost searched
the bodies for anything he could use but decided to leave everything where
it was.
“Well done Max. You handled yourself magnificently.” Jennifer congratulated
him.
“It was them or me. Personally, I like my life. Sort of.” Max said,
thinking to himself, “I like it enough to keep it anyways.”
Max continued down the stairs another two stories until Jennifer alerted
him to a new presence. An Icari was on the steps below.
Icari were genetic mutations caused by exposure to the radiation that emanated
from the Sun. These Icari were once people who had flown too close to the
Sun and had received a dose of radiation that was just enough to let them
live, while deforming either their minds or their bodies. The ones with
deformed brains were the worst. While they usually had some kind of power,
they also had a huge increase in mental ability and are able to tap into
fifty percent of their brain; while the humanoid population in general
can only harness about five percent at its peak. That means a smarter person
is a good thing for humanity, right? Not really. The experience of becoming
one of the Icari is very painful because of the radiation poisoning, and
eventually dives a person mad. Thankfully there are very few of these Icari
around. Most of them die within a few years because of the deterioration
of their brains. Others are often brought to justice, despite if they're
guilty of some kind of crime or not.
The physically deformed of the Icari are not as depraved and are often
very kind to those people who accept them. These Icari do not go mad like
their counter parts, the only pain that they endure is being outcast from
a society of ignorance. The mutations that they undergo are often very
dramatic, such as the gaining of an extra limb or possibly many more. Another
thing that could happen is that a limb might become shriveled and fall
of only to be replaced by some sort of tentacle or even an extra head on
a few documented rare occasions. These rare people are often the most extricated
from society, despite that two heads are often better than one. The man
on the stairs was one of those. He stood six feet tall and had two heads;
each had brown eyes and sandy blond hair. He was well built and muscular,
and looked as if he had seen some fighting in his time.
“Michael! Ben! How are you two? You guys look good today.” Max said
upon seeing his friend.
“Max. You old dog! How are ya? It's been awhile since I've seen you last.
What have you been up to?” Michael and Ben said, at the same time. Although
it happened often, it was very unsettling.
“Not much. The elevator has some new holes in it so Jennifer had me take
the stairs.” Max answered his old friend.
“Wow, you two get even more handsome each time I see you guys. What's
your secret? I want to teach it to Max.” Jennifer said from Max's WristLink,
sounding even more saucy than usual.
“Aw. Come on, Jennie. You don't really think I'm that good looking do
you?” Max and Ben inquired at the same time. Again.
“Yes I do. I wouldn't lie to you guys.” Jennifer told the two the truth.
They weren't as close to her as Max, but they were almost there. Max, though,
had known him since before he had lost his wife to another man.
“Well, first you have to get yourself a ship and plot a course....”
The heads said.
“Do I get any say in this? I mean it is my ruggedly good looks that we're
talking about.” Max put forth.
“No dear you don't.” Jennifer told him. “As you were saying boys?”
Just as she said this Michael and Ben tackled Max to the ground. The air
above them erupted in a hail of weapons fire and from the holes it was
leaving in the walls, it was anti-matter. Michael and Ben mouthed something
to Max. He didn't understand what his friend was trying to tell him, but
Max took a chance and slid his Preyfires out of their holsters. Max kept
one and slid the other to Micheal and Ben.
“Alright ya freaks, come on out and die like ya should!” One voice
shouted with a tone that would have made a Marine drill sergeant cower
in fear, “We're only gonna give ya one chance to redeem yourself then
thats it for ya.”
The sound of boots came rushing up the stairs. It could only mean one thing,
The Purity Group. The Purity Group was a group of religious fanatics that
believed that it was their right and duty to kill individuals that they
believed violated some kind of natural law. This 'natural law' meant Icari,
and often went to also include their friends and family because the Purity
Group felt that Icari spread some kind of taint. They were completely misguided
and refused to listen to reason. Their all white uniform was also reminiscent
of another similarly radical group from the southern United Sates. Only
this uniform didn't consist if flowing robes and a pointy hat, instead
it was a white shirt and pants and a white bandanna. Unfortunately they
were also supported by some government agencies that had access to Anti-matter
weapons.
“I don't know who the Hell you think you are, but we are not coming out
for you, you filthy pigs!” Michael and Ben shouted, rolling over onto
his back so that he could aim between his legs at anyone wishing to climb
the stairs. Max rolled over and faced down the stairs, Preyfire held at
the ready.
“Stay here Max, this is my battle. I've been evading these guys since
the space flight three years ago.” Micheal said, referring to when he
had taken the flight that had changed him into who he was today.
Michael got up, and ducking anti-matter fire all the way, jumped over the
stairway. As he launched himself from the step that led down to the Purity
Group, time seemed to slow to a crawl. Laser beam after laser beam erupted
from the Preyfire, decimating all that was in front of it. Members of the
Purity Group fell like matchsticks in the wind. Seven had fallen and eight
were left when Micheal and Ben landed. He stood up in seconds and had a
barrel at one member's temple. Michael and Ben pulled the trigger and nothing
happened. Just a sharp whine came from the Preyfire. It needed to be recharged.
Michael and Ben caught an elbow to the ribs that sent him reeling away
as pain flowed though his side. As he doubled over a fist came through
the air caught him on the chin and took him into the blackness of unconsciousness.
They picked up his body and fled down the stairs, making a hasty exit.
“Max, they got Michael and Ben. What are we going to do?” Jennifer
asked, worried about her friend.
“Get him back. This Retriever is back on the job.” Max answered her,
no longer worried about the danger of the stairs, or anything else for
that matter.
Max re-holstered his Preyfire and took off down the stairs, pausing only
for a second to retrieve his other gun. The rest of the way was easy going,
The Purity Group scared many of the people in the apartment building into
hiding, Icari weren't the Purity Group's only target. They went for anyone
they considered the least bit impure. The elderly, children, women, everyone
was a target for the slightest imagined transgression.
It was a full fifteen minutes before Max got outside, amidst the inner
city landscape. He smelled burning rubber and could hear the screech of
tires. Max drew his pistols and opened fire on the white vehicle that was
racing away. It was easily recognized as one of the Purity Group's vehicles
because the ID tag contained the group's initials, as the law required
of them. Seeing that the laser fire had done nothing to deter the Purity
Group, Max jumped into his own car and sped away after them. He went at
a break-neck speed through the streets of Sultern hoping against all odds
that he would be able to catch up to the Purity Group. They raced along
the streets, each car riding on a cushion of air. They went down one street
and up another, like a game of cat and mouse with deadly consequences.
Finally, the Purity Group stopped and ran on foot into an alleyway. Max
jumped out and went to the car. Looking inside he found Micheal and Ben;
each had taken a bullet from the Purity Group.
“I’ll get you!” Max shouted as Jennifer wept on his wrist.
Driven even more now by his friends’ death Max took off down the alleyway.
Paying no attention to the shadows Max raced between the two buildings.
With no one in sight Max stopped to catch his breath. That was when everything
around him turned to blackness.
When Max finally woke up, his head was pounding and he felt something wet
running down his back. Max looked around but his surroundings were vague
and unfamiliar. In front of him was a table and beyond that was a longer
table with three high backed chairs. To his left was a large wooded door
all else was stone. Around his neck was a metal collar that was attached
to two heavy chains. The chains, in turn were attached to the ceiling so
that he barely had enough slack to stand with comfort. Max didn't panic
until he saw that Jennifer was on the table before him instead of on his
wrist. He tried reaching for his digital lover but she was just out of
his reach.
“Jennifer!” Max called out, hoping that the Purity Group hadn't destroyed
her.
“Max! I can't believe they got us. What happened?” Jennifer called
out,
“I don't know. I think they hit me over the back of the head when I stopped
to catch my breath. I think I'm bleeding.” Max explained to her.
Just as Max finished speaking, the door burst open to admit three white
robed figures. Max tried to see their faces, but white cowls obscured them.
As he expected the figures moved to the chairs and sat down.
“We are the Pure Ones. You stand here on trial for crimes against humanity
and the laws of nature,” Said the woman in the middle. Although the robe
covered her form, Max could tell that she was a female because of her voice.
The voice was familiar but Max couldn't place it, at least not without
seeing her face. “This is a case that has never been tried before. Not
only are you known to associate with the foul Icari, you have created a
new crime through your association with that.” She spat the last word
as she pointed to to Jennifer.
“What's wrong with owning a computer?” Max asked, only to be lashed
at by the same judge.
“That computer has caused the corruption of your soul Max Penther! It
has corrupted you to very depths of sin and vice!” She spoke with the
fury of a woman scorned, a familiar woman at that. “You have allowed
your heart to become trapped by that mechanical tramp!”
“What the hell are you talking about and who do you think you are? Talking
about Jennifer like that. How dare you slaughter innocent people in the
name of righteousness! And you dare to call others impure. You make me
sick.” Max yelled at her, spitting in the general direction of the judges.
"Do you really wish to know who accuses you of these crimes? Do you think
that you can handle the awful truth?” the woman asked.
“Yes I do, because when you release me from these chains I will kill
you.” Max said as calmly and coolly as possible.
The woman stood and reached for her cowl and threw it back with such ferocity
that her fiery red hair splayed out from the collar of her robes. The face
that was revealed was his ex-wife's.
“Michelle? Are you kidding me? That can't be you under there. Shouldn't
you be back on Earth?”
“I moved when I heard that we were going to be bombed again. I left a
message at your office that I had moved to your city. I wanted to be close
to you again so that I could tell you that I changed my mind about Dave,
my husband. Well, ex-husband now.” she explained to him.
“Just how did you get here? How close did you get to the sun? How many
Icari came off that ship when it landed? Tell me that! You're insane!”
“We came pretty close to the sun. Yes, some Icari came off the ship but
I am not one of those filthy things.”
“How do you know? The girl I married never acted like this. She was even
friends with Michael and Ben. How do you justify killing one of your friends?”
“He was impure. He was not meant to live, and because of your love of
a machine neither are you.” Michelle smiled sadistically at this. She
motioned to the other judges beside her and they left the room. “I'll
give you one chance to show your love for me, and if you don't comply,
not only will you die, but Jennifer IV will be erased. Sent to the great
computerized nether world.”
“What do you want me to do?” Max asked resigning himself to whatever
fate awaited him.
When he was done speaking the doors opened again to admit the other judges.
They entered pushing a small cart with a metal box on it. Out of the box
ran wires, one of which ended in what looked like a pen. It was an eraser,
a machine used to wipe the memory banks of a computer. It could also be
used on a WristLink, all that was needed was the memory chip which housed
the AI.
“Erase Jennifer IV or you both die. It's that simple. I love you Max
but I wont hesitate to kill you for defying the laws of nature. What you
are doing, it's just not right.” Michelle said, taking his head in her
hands, “Now all you need to do is to touch that pen to the memory chip
and all will be forgiven.”
“Go to Hell.” Max said, just before her spitting on her, “I love
her more than I ever loved you. Do what you will, but I will always love
Jennifer!”
“So be it. Have it your way. Boot Jennifer and give me the pen.” Michelle
said as she stormed over to the table.
“Max! Help me! I'm trapped over here! Do something!” Jennifer cried
out, hoping in vain that Max would be able to do something to save her.
“I love you.” Was all that he was able to call out before Michelle
touched the pen to Jennifer IV's memory chip, forever deleting any trace
of her programming.
Max broke down at that moment and started to weep openly for the computerized
woman that he had loved so much. Never before had he felt so much pain,
not even when he had found Beth in bed with another man did he hurt so
much.
“Do what you will to me, you've already taken all that I've ever loved
from me.
At this, Michelle stalked over to him and withdrew one of his Preyfire
pistols from her robe and placed it to his temple. “Goodbye, my love.”
was the last thing Max ever heard.
Comments on "To Love a Machine"
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On Wednesday, November 23, 2005, JiNx
(98) wrote:
That was awesome... and as many have said before, I couldn't stop reading it. lol Great write hun.. -Jessie
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On Monday, July 4, 2005, Mahakala
(207) wrote:
Wow this is absolutely awsome...I just couldn't stop reading...great write...look forward to reading more stories from you...
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On Wednesday, June 22, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(309) wrote:
yes...you do have talent..and you should POST MORE! hint hint! lol thats why ur on my favs, ur a great writer! and a good person..of course...
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On Tuesday, June 21, 2005, Dysphoria
(88) wrote:
this is fucking amazing! I loved reading this, you have talent and I definatly look forward to reading more of your work! -morbid
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On Monday, June 20, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(309) wrote:
wow...ur such an amazing storyteller! who knew?! confused on some parts, some stupid lil errors that aren't worth fixing..but jeez, dude, you did great!!! so proud of you! this is awesome! great work! -Kel
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On Monday, June 20, 2005, DarkSoul
(19) wrote:
Yeah, about those errors, I had a friend correct it and I was using her name so I decided to change just in case she got offended.
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A former member wrote:
I love it...can't wait for more
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A former member wrote:
as a fan of sci-fi and fantasy, imagine my surprise to see this here. It was written well enough to keep my attention,not overly technical as to alienate the reader, I truly enjoyed reading this. I hope this is a only a preview of what is to be expected