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Listen
By DarkSoul
Build me up.
Tear me down.
Like a sandcastle
Against a tidal wave.
Disintegrated by
Your life’s blood
Of care and tenderness.
You try to be gentle
But your words pull me apart.
I hear of all the time
You spend with him.
I’ve told you so many times
About his character.
So free. So loose. So faithless.
Why can’t you see
That he cheats on you?
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Copyright 2005 DarkSoul
Published on Thursday, January 20, 2005.
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"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, February 1, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(309)
wrote:
i dont like people who dont see what their bf\gf really is and you try 2 tell them cuz u wanna look out for them cuz u love them\still love them.. -Kel
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A former member wrote:
Nicely written. Alot of it comes down to "Listen." Most in these situations don't do it. Very nicely worded.
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A former member wrote:
I hate having to deal with people who cheat.. This is a very good write, though. :) --beautiful
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On Thursday, January 20, 2005, K_Love
(525) wrote:
"Against a tidal wave. Disintegrated by Your life’s blood" -- Beautiful line. Sad and painful write, well written. Very good job.
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