Comments by Lynaes
- "Oh man.. this really is familiar. it's shocking to read something that's so close to home.. you've worded this perfectly. I'm sorry for your pain, this killed me. Amazing work."
Posted by Lynaes on "fuck" by KittyStryker
- "I love this so much.. the descriptions are so true and unique. I especially like the "neither would admit" stanza. and I love it being spoken in the third person too. Amazing work."
Posted by Lynaes on "the shattering of the dream" by KittyStryker
- "Wonderful use of metaphor and word play, it really drew the emotions and the effect of them into you. I particularly liked "i am an alter i give you what i have". Stunning work, perfectly worded.
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Posted by Lynaes on ".... i believe ..." by KittyStryker
- "Absolutely heart breaking, I'm so sorry for what you've gone through, for what you are going through. I really felt your pain through this. Amazing work, I just hope everything gets better for you. "
Posted by Lynaes on "what happened to the boy i loved?" by KittyStryker
- "Amazing work! We don't have the discriminating 'perfect' features such as the ones you speak of, It's who we are that makes us, not what we look like and that should be accepted. Awesome point make here, brilliant. ~L "
Posted by Lynaes on "imperfect" by KittyStryker
