Comments by capt_funguy

  • "slappin' spoons to the time of broken feet - with the razzle dazzle of a cafeteria repetitionist .. this simpleton's trusty beatbox ... you're a riot ... and you're so damn good at this ... funguy"
    Posted by capt_funguy on "Never Leave While in the Key of C" by odetobarbie
  • "ebb and flow ... constatnt continuum .. clock mechanisms grinding their gears .. attention there and gone . comparative like a resignation - there's a world in this .. spinning .. and it's beautiful ... funguy"
    Posted by capt_funguy on "the beached fantastic" by odetobarbie
  • "the nightmare that is 4A.M. sweatfilm coated, cockringed slave to - can i own you?, sick, twisted priority - risk their lives for a token pair of little white sox ... that's how i read it, and yeah, theyre out there ... great stuff ... funguy"
    Posted by capt_funguy on "rich or weary" by odetobarbie
  • "this is like hiroshima, the manson family or anything else that would be impossible if it hadn't actually happened - a very specific kind of truth that you wouldn't believe if "
    Posted by capt_funguy on "ghetto wife" by odetobarbie
  • "this is serious. yet another inspirational piece. your words prove how fun intensity can be. like murder on a playground . funguy"
    Posted by capt_funguy on "Plastic Pillows" by odetobarbie
  • "man, so swift, so determined, so original... you're writing what hasn't been written , and that's so fricken' rare. funguy"
    Posted by capt_funguy on "EcoPass" by odetobarbie
  • "truly awesome display of controlled expression. speaks itself clearly through clenched teeth. very impressive piece of work .. funguy "
    Posted by capt_funguy on "turn in" by odetobarbie
  • "i read this forward three times and backwards four .. it made me do that .... i owed it that .. im glad this happened - thankyou very much ... funguy"
    Posted by capt_funguy on "Quitters Never Win" by odetobarbie
  • "" sometimes " can be pulled along on a golden chariot ... an exalted word that discomforts everyone for their own personal replay reasons ... slick ... funguy"
    Posted by capt_funguy on "Sometimes" by odetobarbie
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