the beached fantastic

By odetobarbie



so the nights go on and on
waves smashing against days
foam drifting from dusk
currents swelling with dawn

salt licks upper lips
pursed & coated sweet
shore laps stone-white skin
curves & silently screams

so the nights go on and on
darkness light
hand in hand
rising falling
side by side
so we will go on and on

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© 2007 odetobarbie
Published on Sunday, December 9, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: intoxicatingly lovely.

  • capt_funguy On Sunday, December 9, 2007, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    ebb and flow ... constatnt continuum .. clock mechanisms grinding their gears .. attention there and gone . comparative like a resignation - there's a world in this .. spinning .. and it's beautiful ... funguy

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