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Never Leave While in the Key of C
By odetobarbie
man so lovie
man so hip
like a two beat
nood-ling
come thud tightly
drum thump rightly
like a morse code
para-graph
fresh mad method
dead man love
like a tap shoe
ro-mance
smokin threads
unraveling beds
like a matinee
dis-count
tag above
clap below
like an ex-wife
gang-bang
man so lovely
man so lonely
like a breathless
gasp
me beat
knee deep
like a long lost
kiss
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© 2008 odetobarbie
Published on Thursday, January 31, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Never Leave While in the Key of C"
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On Monday, September 25, 2017, Just Dave
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wrote:
Fun to read. Great word choices. Nice flow to. Thanks. JD
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On Thursday, January 17, 2013, matteus
(28) wrote:
i deeply like the way you structure your words
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A former member wrote:
Very effective flow. Without doubt, an interesting and cool read. +tpu+
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On Monday, July 28, 2008, carlosjackal
(3016) wrote:
This is so brilliantly done and made to look effortless and a piece of piss to write..Deserving of many more comments. Top stuff, indeed. -Carl
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On Thursday, February 7, 2008, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
slappin' spoons to the time of broken feet - with the razzle dazzle of a cafeteria repetitionist .. this simpleton's trusty beatbox ... you're a riot ... and you're so damn good at this ... funguy
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