EcoPass
By odetobarbie
Note from:
smiley face
burning shuddering
deep in my pocket
remarks highly on
my ass
in these pants
back pockets
embroidered
with obtusely angled
denim rays
armored from
sex shrapnel
by laminated access cards
and a holographic
bus pass
my ride
isn’t on the schedule written
by self-described dykes
and pathetically giggling
prom kings
love streams
through iPods and dreams
filling my nightmares
with redundant
back-beats
my lips
detect a hint of plagiarism
in your kiss –
so urgently
hesitant
leaving
an aftertaste
past due
for a skinny dip
in the nearest pint glass
my climb
is on whichever
bus comes my way
for none
travel far enough
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© 2006 odetobarbie
Published on Monday, November 13, 2006.
Filed under:
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On Sunday, December 17, 2006, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
man, so swift, so determined, so original... you're writing what hasn't been written , and that's so fricken' rare. funguy
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On Wednesday, November 15, 2006, Railway_Butterfly
(353) wrote:
this is fantastic. i really mean that.. it's fucking fantastic. i'm so pleased to see that you've posted, but i'm dissappointed for you, to come here & see there are no other words where there should be..