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Quitters Never Win
By odetobarbie
one wide gauge
hipped at the join
viciously packed
boxed flip-top coffins
one wide gauge
cyclically vanishing zippos
amid end-table turf wars
lemon pepsi redbulls
one wide gauge
cellophane cat’s cradle
modishly wound
sturgeon general’s EULA.
one wide gauge
eluded existential attentions
poisoned abysmal inhalation
sanctioned lonely exultation
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Copyright 2005 odetobarbie
Published on Sunday, May 8, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Quitters Never Win"
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On Wednesday, January 11, 2006, capt_funguy
(778)
wrote:
i read this forward three times and backwards four .. it made me do that .... i owed it that .. im glad this happened - thankyou very much ... funguy
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On Sunday, May 8, 2005, darkdesires
(139) wrote:
Wow this is just beyond my words... the last verse is just perfection... i love it.
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A former member wrote:
This is very good.....stainless alienation, annit just?
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