Comments by Alanarchy
- "Feels like going numb. Very desperate and dark. This is one hell of a read. I love the word "Caustic" by the way. It doesn't come around much. Groovy stuff, darlin. Write the hell on."
Posted by Alanarchy on "chasing nite.mares" by denver nitze
- "Very entertaining. Ugh, that's a nasty feeling. But the imagery, though unflattering :D was great. Dig it, hardcore. Hey stylet, feel better."
Posted by Alanarchy on "!!blow me!!" by denver nitze
- "If I were you, I'd choose two or maybe three little stanza's to treat as your chorus. So you don't sing the same lyrics for the chorus each time it comes around. I don't know about you, but too much repetition can ruin a song for me. It makes it boring."
Posted by Alanarchy on "hermetic doors opened" by denver nitze
- ""Lost within, and lost without/Carrion dreams turn to lust/Reverie all day long/Dreams turned to dust" Awesome lines. Love to hear this with music. Feels like it calls for piano, the most. To me anyway. Either way, I dig it hardcore."
Posted by Alanarchy on "hermetic doors opened" by denver nitze
