Comments by Alanarchy
- "That final line was like stepping off the edge of the world, into oblivion."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Lost" by lstdarkness
- "Horrible, man. The story gave me chills, especially tha lines about how the cops discribed your teeth "strewn across the sidewalk like stars spread over the sky." Wicked, man. Kudos on an excellent contribution."
Posted by Alanarchy on ""Everyone is someone's Jew"" by lstdarkness
- "I've never been addicted to cocaine, although once and a while, I do get cravings. Most of the time, I feel like it's over rated. But some people surly don't, and I've seen what it can do to a person. You captured that like a photograph, or a scratched"
Posted by Alanarchy on "Addiction." by lstdarkness
- "Ahhh, now I see. Funny how two little words just snapped the crux in place for me. "
Posted by Alanarchy on "Rise" by lstdarkness
- "The end was either very profound, or unfinished. I can't tell from here. I found this interesting."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Rise" by lstdarkness
- ""You are my goddess, a star that crashed comely into my chaotic life." Beautiful. It's good to have the person in our lives that keep us grounded, and happy. I really enjoyed this, man. Welcom to DP, And Write the hell on."
Posted by Alanarchy on "For Her." by lstdarkness
