Rise
By lstdarkness
My life has collapsed.
The pillars of my soul,
have fallen in on themselves.
The dust of my remains cloud,
the stars from view.
The stars are hidden.
How will my soul find it’s way,
lost in the nothing?
Wondering for eternity,
until it finds it’s home.
The dust settles.
I coats my lifeless body,
a blanket of cold.
The star’s light shines,
on my glazed dead eyes.
The pain washes away.
The light warms my,
my cold body.
Breathe forces it’s way
inside my lungs.
I gasp and stand.
I rise again for the,
next person to destroy.
I rise a new stronger,
you can not destroy what,
I am.
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© 2006 lstdarkness
Published on Thursday, August 10, 2006.
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On Friday, January 5, 2007, GraveFlower
(249) wrote:
very good, i can just picture it in the begining with the dust and stars and pillars, thats really hard to accomplish, really, good job ~*dani*~
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On Thursday, August 10, 2006, lstdarkness
(26) wrote:
there fixed.
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On Thursday, August 10, 2006, lstdarkness
(26) wrote:
how about unfinished... I didn't get the end in there!
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On Thursday, August 10, 2006, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
Ahhh, now I see. Funny how two little words just snapped the crux in place for me.
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On Thursday, August 10, 2006, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
The end was either very profound, or unfinished. I can't tell from here. I found this interesting.