Comments by Maladroit

  • "Gut wrenching, really. The way you write from a woman's POV... I know you would have told her too that the problem started when she thought herself "plain"- "
    Posted by Maladroit on "plain girl" by FadedBlues
  • "I would go broke on her- there is nothing better than buying a prostitue and asking her to rest her head, prop her feet, and share an opinion. I keep mine in lipstick for stimulation minus touch with full body participation. Each time you write- it is typically respectful. I'm am not sure if that respect or if your poetry is more beautiful. "
    Posted by Maladroit on "fantasy merchant" by FadedBlues
  • "You know the sound the champagne bottle makes when you open it- all the pressure building and releasing? The pop?- that is what the last line sounded like..."
    Posted by Maladroit on "pagan eyes!" by FadedBlues
  • "I am not sure how I missed this- her demeanor says it all for me; loud and clear. How wise you are. It's like she's staring in that tea cup hoping escaped herbs will answer her much like a magic 8 ball. "
    Posted by Maladroit on "girl w/flowered cup" by FadedBlues
  • "Not matter how much education I obtain, two things beyond my comprehension are abusive relationships and addiction. For me, it seems sosimple, leave & quit. I have a hard time coughing up sympathy and an even harder time faking it. "
    Posted by Maladroit on "too many women" by FadedBlues
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