Comments by xZombie Poptartzx
- "This was a good write, I enjoyed it... near the beginning you wrote "but he dont know" which should be doesn't** (just trying to help, not be a grammar nazi haha) xoxo"
Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "Strip Club Glamour" by TornPieces
- "The world is a sick place, and no one will ever understand why these things happen to them. You took a disgusting reality, and descried it in the more gorgeous way. I agree... Breathtaking "
Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "Ophelia's Forgotten" by TornPieces
