Hush Little Susie

By TornPieces

 Hush little child stop telling lies
Mama's gonna buy you a rope to tie
around your neck and through the loop
goes litle susies neck and foot. 

Hush little sweetie, no sense in screams
The neighbors gave up, dont you see 
They wont hear you, neither will I
What a sight , say bye bye

Your lies and stories cried wolf
and now nobody believes them
Im a good mama, 
Im a good mama,
Oh why susie, why do you lie about your own mama.

Now be a good baby and hold still, 
mamas not gonna kill...
but just enough, 
mamas gonna make it tight enough..
next time.

You'll learn your lesson, baby....
little sweetie...that dirty lie

mamas never wrong..
and babies are never right
Susie cried wolf and now nobody hears her
Mama cried truth, aint that right susie dear....



Hush little Susie dont say a word
Mama hurts you? Why thats absurd. 

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Copyright 2012 TornPieces
Published on Thursday, August 16, 2012.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I agree with alot of the other fans here i liked reading that from the start to the finish.

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Thursday, August 16, 2012, xZombie Poptartzx (332)By person wrote:

    This is twisted... I love it ! Quite the interesting punishment for lying... *takes notes* ♥

  • A former member wrote: Very sinister...reminds me a bit of The Hand That Rocks the Cradle.

  • Invisible Girl On Thursday, August 16, 2012, Invisible Girl (134)By person wrote:

    Good and creepy... thanks

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