Comments by Deviated09

  • " Very few know what it's like to be surrounded by love yet not be more alone.. I regret being able to relate so closely to this piece. excellent write! Nothing ever comes to be a better writing than something from the heart."
    Posted by Deviated09 on "ignored screams" by poe_lover28
  • "Love the styling of this. It really gives the insight into the chaotic, driven mind of someone addicted, needing that next move, living in the moment, never wanting the bliss to end or accept what reality is slamming against you"
    Posted by Deviated09 on "ADDICTED" by poe_lover28
  • "Being thrown over the line and dragged out of view of it a few times, I know how the worst of pains can be. You have a pretty clear view of the lost, numb soul trying to feel, trying to be. Very good write"
    Posted by Deviated09 on "Mirror Mirror On the Wall" by poe_lover28
  • "Very good write my friend. I can fit pieces of my own path into that all too well. I like how you set the rythm and rhymes thoughout. Nice work! :-)"
    Posted by Deviated09 on "Locked Inside" by poe_lover28
  • "Very good write here. The introspective mind is usually the sharpest. Just know that you make the looks of your identity, both to others and yourself. If you don't like what you see in the mirror and can't change, atleast putting on another mask will help make things tolerable until change can be met.. keep the pen flowing as these feelings may surge. That alone may be enough to help"
    Posted by Deviated09 on "Their hate" by poe_lover28
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