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Comments by dwells

"Last line was a bit of a reach, consider perhaps "Man descends, his death will not be quick" or something similar. Overall quite dark and downcast with a foreboding tone to the narrative. I liked it, thanks!"
Posted by dwells on "Vivid Armageddon " by WatchTheWorldCollapse

"Loving the flow of this, very fluid and aquatic. Sounds like you are giving her fair warning, good one, thanks!"
Posted by dwells on "metaphoric euphoria " by WatchTheWorldCollapse

"Nice job on this ode to a "down on their luck" vocalist perhaps? Misery loves company, or just sharing pain and failure? Still pondering, thanks. "
Posted by dwells on "say goodbye" by WatchTheWorldCollapse

"How about "Useful Idiots" for a title, or not. This was quite the thoughtful piece, isolated and insulated people, nice job."
Posted by dwells on "Untitled" by WatchTheWorldCollapse

"I liked the repetive nature of this and was hoping for maybe one more stanza, well done, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "I caught fire" by WatchTheWorldCollapse

"Sounds finished to me but the poet usually knows best - give it a day or two. I liked this a lot, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "the portrait of a skull" by WatchTheWorldCollapse

"Interesting opening sounded parasitic but further development explained a few things, thanks and well done."
Posted by dwells on "Lost Love" by WatchTheWorldCollapse

"Ladyhawke pretty well summed things up but know that you have a fan in me too, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Beautiful Afterlife" by WatchTheWorldCollapse

"Ashes to ashes...Novel thought here and quite right, thanks for the view!"
Posted by dwells on "aged graves" by WatchTheWorldCollapse

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