Comments by Alchemist
- "Loved the analysis. I have always enjoyed the challenge of describing color or other perceptions of our senses. Sound and touch/feel are a little easier but taste and color are much harder because the very words we use to describe these things are what we are describing. Like how do you describe salty or sweet with out using those words or the food itself. I wrote a poem called Tribute to Red if you want to check it out sometime."
Posted by Alchemist on "if you ask me, Mother Goose was just another scapegoat" by Devil lyn
- "I don't know what to comment other than it kinda has the feel of something I was thinking of today and probably won't use so I might as well put it here. I'm the chef in cartel kitchens, creating ultimatums like Alton Brown, we could legalize sin and keep the murder rate down, or continue prohibition, citizens are criminals now."
Posted by Alchemist on "10,000 leprechauns & 1 death star" by Devil lyn
- "This reminds me of the book "the things they carried" it's a war novel but instead of focusing on the battle the writing focused on what they choose to carry around with them. Which told you alot about a person considering they couldn't carry much during war time. I really enjoyed this and I think sometimes just describing the little things and seemingly insignificant tidbits sets the mood of the story much better than a long drawn out description."
Posted by Alchemist on "barbara" by Devil lyn
- ""Shall we trade a 1000 years for a fueling duel of indecency, I'm dying to fall in love with you, I hope you find your prince my love as the world doesnt need another king." I love all three of those lines but that last one is one I'm jealous of, lol. To me being jealous you didn't wrote a line is the biggest compliment I could give you."
Posted by Alchemist on "concubine`a" by Devil lyn
