Comments by OLd SouL
- "Hey this was pretty cool.. I read it forward, backwards, sidewards...errmm. delicious every way. :) :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "A dying mind" by nightshade
- "Honestly.. the flow needs a bit of work BUT the emotion is great. Raw, powerful. Find the balance... you can't over concentrate on rhyme or you'll miss the emotion/point. But if you don't have enough, the piece will not be smooth.. Its tough.. but you're "
Posted by OLd SouL on "Dashed Hopes" by nightshade
