Comments by Liz
- "And the tiny details don't so much matter anyway, and that's clear. You only have to know a little to know it all, and you only have to describe a little for us"
Posted by Liz on "[bane]" by Six-Out
- "I like how short it is. Not that less is more with you, but I like that it's just a clip, just a segment of something bigger we don't quite get to see fully. Just an idea, an observation, to mull over..."
Posted by Liz on "[bane]" by Six-Out
- ""and babe. we've just begun" -great line. Left me grinning. "possibly of us" -not quite so great. Breaks the tone w/out the payoff. Overall hot and insightful, despite minor things like that."
Posted by Liz on "[rainbows].and.[butterflies]" by Six-Out
- "I really like the repetion. Again and again, "an empty ashtray and a broken heart." That really is life, if you think on the utopia long enough."
Posted by Liz on "[crash&burn]" by Six-Out
