Comments by Malcholm Dark
- "an answer to the question... it makes you the smart one... a nice piece here, well written... write on"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "F*****" by keltruth7
- "Great poem, your thoughts are very welcomed. I have one opinion, the 3rd line maybe shouldn't end in 'the'... I thought a little of the flow was lost. I think you can say what you wanted in 2 lines or 3. Thanks for the write."
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "shadowed" by keltruth7
- "Shameless, yes. But without it, no dark poetry. I see the dark, maybe it's a part of me. I love to write about it, cause it colors me so. Thanks for the write. "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "machine" by keltruth7
- "Well written, so sad. Too bad you didn't title this piece. This reminded me of what someone told me once.. 'lost away dreams'... Use it if you want... Thanks for the write."
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "untitled" by keltruth7
- "Wow, struggles, struggles, strugles. Without them their wouldn't be any great poetry to read. 'stranger than fiction, stranger of me'... Brilliant line. Thanks for the write. "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "stranger me" by keltruth7
- "I am over-taken! Blown away.... I love this style.. 'saturated souls, timeless, endless matter'... Brilliant lines, thanks. I must apologize, sometimes good poetry is quickly lost due to the large amount of poems being posted. You'll not be missed again. "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "done" by keltruth7
