Comments by Dilated View
- "I found this to be pretty profound man. The moon imagery hooked me and the last stanza tugged me to shore. Excellent visuals as always Ray."
Posted by Dilated View on "To Become a God" by Riven Waker
- "Jesus Ray this was an epic journey. The flow was excellent and the imagery put me in a place of lurking death. Very nicely written and well worth the read. Always hard to express just how much I enjoy your mind."
Posted by Dilated View on "Tomb of Magnus Araneus" by Riven Waker
- ""To brave and break across thet
Monolithic windowpane was my
Only answer" My god man evey visual you create throughout your works that are overflowing with visuals just astound me. I'm really curious where this series is going to end up. Captivating would be an understatement. Your works play like a documentary in my mind. Write on sir."
Posted by Dilated View on "Bailiwick of Legerdemain 3: The Skull of Anthraxus" by Riven Waker
- "Powerful and post-apocalyptic feel. As usual vivid visuals throughout. I really liked the way you ended it in the last two lines. Left me wondering what would happen next. Cool man."
Posted by Dilated View on "The Dream Descent" by Riven Waker
- ""Take me by the clawed wing along the
Edges like some nightshade make me
Forget all the horrid inane thoughts and dreams" these lines especially but the overall piece as well gave me visions of being torn apart and finding rebirth and enlightenment instead of death. I suppose we pay the heaviest prices for the greatest treasures. May not be what you intended but I enjoyed this all the same :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "The Consummation of Minds' Reaches" by Riven Waker
- "Damn man. I'm not sure I know the significance of the 13 eternities but this felt like being reborn through solitude and finding the truths that set us free and allow us to shape the world. Nicely written, powerful stuff."
Posted by Dilated View on "Thirteen Eternities of Solitude" by Riven Waker
- "I thought the structure was very interesting the upper section looked very orb-like. Once again you paint such an immense amount of imagery with each line. Much enjoyed :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "The Orb of Blood" by Riven Waker
- "The cruel repetition at the end was hypnotic. Like a threat to anyone who makes the mistake of getting in the way. Vivid visuals throughout. Gracias :p"
Posted by Dilated View on "These Woods" by Riven Waker
- ""I have shed more than blood
In the battles my craven heart braves
I would still rather kill than die
But who wouldn't" Intense. I have a hard time expressing what exactly it is I like about your works but know that they are appreciated. You use a style of imagery that only you could own and I can dig it. Much enjoyed."
Posted by Dilated View on "Eyes of the Dragon" by Riven Waker
- "I wasn't sure what to expect but this did not disappoint. Your choice of words really worked for me. Very unique. The ending hinted at doom to follow. Nicely crafted :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "Bailiwick of Legerdemain" by Riven Waker
