Comments by ubiquitoussoul
- "this poem is fantastic..the beat..the content like music to my ears ..so heavy and pressing..smoother than licked moonlight by the sweating heart"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Godly Men" by Rowan
- "The imagery..so dark and cold..I can see the lit sky..Cinderella playing..I hear the sighs..Grim little poem..."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Evergreen" by Rowan
- "Okay..looks like I'm going to hell..oh well lol...Nice write..Anything Dante always inspires epic work..paired together with your mind..We've hit a gold mine.."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Inferno" by Rowan
- "This is sad and touching..*wipes tear*..and the imagery..as if I was there.."like the wings of a butterfly over your chest".."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Breath of Life" by Rowan
- "Wonderful..My favorite line would have to be the closing one..all this and then boom!Slapped with the truth."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Vanity" by Rowan
- "A vivid ride..war and chaos this was an epic event..each stanza was mighty and powerful like this piece..Thanks. "
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Titans" by Rowan
- "Oh yeah and the imagery in this piece and that of Dante's is very reminiscent to the work of Hieronymus Bosch an early Netherlandish painter...you should check him out..his stuff is so gruesome...very mind boggling."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Woods of the Suicides" by Rowan
- "Ah yes Rowan..this brought me back to the very scene..I remember it like it was yesterday..Canto XIII-Circle Seven...So people do listen..Dante speaks only true wisdom :P..you suicidal will face this manacled fate..I really enjoyed your gruesome twist on one of the many great morbid scenes found in the inferno..Each stanza was unique..it remained pretty close to the original but with your own words-awesome job on that..the flaming sands...the weeping branches and those tortured suffering souls..Epic fits this poem.,Thanks for the amazing write.."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Woods of the Suicides" by Rowan
- "The ending...:)..I cant even quote anything..every line was majestic..the imagery was too real..Sensual..I could feel,hear as if in your dream..Wow."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Sweet Dreams" by Rowan
- "You always surprise me Rowan..This was an incredible piece..Different from what I've seen from you...The message is powerful and blunt and straight to the facts. Verse for verse you kept the flow and rhythm in pact.I also sense a poem of the day..Really Enjoyed this..Thanks and Take Care. "
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "We All Die Now" by Rowan
- "This brought a huge smile on to my face :) It was beautiful..it sucked me right in..into this scene..I could sit behind your eyes and believe. And the last line..just sunk my heart in that warm butterfly kind of way. Amazing, Rowan."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "In My Eyes" by Rowan
