Comments by Efamilia

"*Insert standing-ovation here* For there's really nothing left for me to say. Awesome write, Kellie!!! And yes, I agree Col, come on people - give the girl a bookmark!"
Posted by Efamilia on "Flower Girl" by Narcissa

"WOW! I really like this! You created a really COOL atmosphere - ok, sorry about that (I couldn't help myself :) *clicks bookmark*"
Posted by Efamilia on "Red Wine and Snow" by Mistress Shadow

"Yep - reading it again, that sounds way better, maybe I'll celebrate with a drink! (joke) ...Fuck it, I'm going to bed :("
Posted by Efamilia on "Glass Trains To Nowhere..." by Efamilia

"Yeah, well, for I'm pretty much too drunk to care, so I just changed it for the fuck of things and I'll wait til morning! ha! ;)"
Posted by Efamilia on "Glass Trains To Nowhere..." by Efamilia

"To be honest, I actually wrote this as a tribute of sorts, as 'the raven' is possibly my favourite of the classic works. It sounds so natural to read; yet I've found trying to emulate that style when writing, to be nothing but frustrasting! At least I've, so far, gotten away without the wrath I was fearing from obsessive "Poe" fans! Cheers for the comments, btw - I'm going back to my own style now :)"
Posted by Efamilia on "The Haunting of Mr. Lombale" by Efamilia

"Ha! I even stuffed up the comment, I meant to say "...Dost thou beseech me?""
Posted by Efamilia on "The Haunting of Mr. Lombale" by Efamilia

"* Still not sure about the Old English, let us know if I stuffed it up. That line in the third stanza nearly got replace with "Who art thou? Dost thou beseech thee?" Oh well, let us know what you think :)"
Posted by Efamilia on "The Haunting of Mr. Lombale" by Efamilia

"Thanks to everyone for your comments! Glad you liked it. At the moment you guys are the only inspiration I have to keep writing... thanks again :)"
Posted by Efamilia on "Of Sentiment and Seperation-anxiety" by Efamilia

"Haha.. it's funny you say that, coz this literally only took five minutes at the most to write. Normally I do the whole crossing shit out, tearing pages out.. but this one pretty much wrote itself. If I wasn't drinking at the time and was more patient in general, maybe I would've produced one of those elusive "epics" :)"
Posted by Efamilia on "Of Sentiment and Seperation-anxiety" by Efamilia

"Well said! Heavily felt... Whether they know it or not, people are, for the most part, stereotypically-subservient! Don't judge a book by it's cover - use it to smack some sense into them ;)"
Posted by Efamilia on "Judge a Book by its Cover" by TheReap

"And there's the other ones who seem to enjoy putting a rose in your hand, just to rip it out and cut you open! This whole fucking world is just a game..."
Posted by Efamilia on "Judge a Book by its Cover" by TheReap

"***This is a follow up to the poem I wrote earlier called "Let the song stop playing" :)"
Posted by Efamilia on "Paper Cut-out Dancers" by Efamilia

"I stuffed up and deleted my original post accidentally when I tried to update and finish it! Please comment again, whoever you are - it really sucks when I lose my comments :("
Posted by Efamilia on "Not One For Roses" by Efamilia