Not One For Roses
By Efamilia
She painted her portrait
As Life itself
Had painted her's...
Short, sharp brush strokes
Scattered colour
Bold lines of empty canvas
No real depth
Although shadow
Behind her
To one side
Half a page of black
Some saw this as a mistake
Painted over
Others as darkness
Depression
‘One of them’
She smiled
I smiled back
Another one for the file
We laughed
She liked the colour red
But for passion
Not blood
Her music was quiet
Acoustic
Melancholy
She liked flowers
They have their place
But not one for roses
The trading of
For grace
She spoke of death
But not in veneration
Not for longing, of such
She felt peace at the cemetery
The comfort of silence
Nature
It reminded her she was alive
In spite of what others said
I went to see her today
And gave her flowers
...But not roses :(
Comments on "Not One For Roses"
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A former member wrote:
wow. this is great. gave me a nostalgic sort of feeling.
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On Saturday, November 10, 2007, soul dancer
(95) wrote:
Quietly beautiful.
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On Saturday, November 10, 2007, Narcissa
(391) wrote:
I'm sorry I missed this before - What a beautiful picture you painted with your words.
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On Saturday, November 10, 2007, Efamilia
(15) wrote:
I stuffed up and deleted my original post accidentally when I tried to update and finish it! Please comment again, whoever you are - it really sucks when I lose my comments :(