Glass Trains To Nowhere...

By Efamilia

"Taking Glass Trains To Nowhere, With Pockets Of Return Tickets"


Vacant stares
Falling on
Glassed-eyes
Empty
Yet still
Ironically-reflective
Reminding me of
This game
We hate
But still
We play
Like pawns
Subserving
To thoughts
And values
Just enough to
Get us by

Like fools
All aboard
Glass trains
Sound off
With no voice
In humanity’s
Broken game
Of plays
And pageants
A Misguided
Three-ring-circus
Standing in line
Protesting
Only to buy
Front row tickets
Like hypocrites

Then stagger
Back to
Our home
Our fortress
Our TV
Welcoming us
Back to
The same
Society
We avoid
But are still
Obsessed
To watch
In vain
Vicariously
Living
Living
Living

...but is this

...really life?

(Dance monkey, dance - Spin that wheel - I'll buy that for a dollar!)

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© 2008 Efamilia
Published on Saturday, March 1, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • urbanhumility On Monday, May 26, 2008, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    a lucid and concise emotion you portray

  • A former member wrote: how did I miss this one my friend. wonderful as always. and remember to *cheer in moderation :P* ~ hdb.

  • denver nitze On Saturday, March 1, 2008, denver nitze (251)By person wrote:

    what were you drinking by the way? drunk poetry rocks. very well done.

  • TheUltimateOutlaw On Saturday, March 1, 2008, TheUltimateOutlaw (43)By person wrote:

    I like this. Effectively conveyed the mundanity and hypocrisy of everyday life in a unique format. Although, i would've used the title line and called them glass trains rather than broken. Just me though.

  • Efamilia On Saturday, March 1, 2008, Efamilia (15)By person wrote:

    Yeah, well, for I'm pretty much too drunk to care, so I just changed it for the fuck of things and I'll wait til morning! ha! ;)

  • Efamilia On Saturday, March 1, 2008, Efamilia (15)By person wrote:

    Yep - reading it again, that sounds way better, maybe I'll celebrate with a drink! (joke) ...Fuck it, I'm going to bed :(

  • Dancing_Monkey On Saturday, March 1, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    Mono rail lines.

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