Comments by The Zebra Warrior
- "I enjoyed this one...the creepy atmosphere extolled - the "shadow men"; yeah, short but potent poem chock-loaded with Horror-themed imagery and nice wrod handling.....cool poem scenario :D"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "the Shadow Men" by tinkdarkchyld
- "very very original and somehow, I found it humorous - don't know if you were just playing about but I loved all the 'ip' sounds playing off each other and then the ..."falls dead" almost deadpan like ending...definitely different and refreshingly so for it...I thought it was pretty cool"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "wall crawler meets his end..." by DIATRICUS
- "hahahaha....pirate laugh - "ye forsaken ye soul, now we must bury it with me treasures!!" Corporate ensalving? Yes, I've seen it all, been in amongst it all...I too chortled along with the satire, but also, the subtle undertones, the memo-drone style of some head honcho bigwig talking in office pyschobabble and trying to come across all-important. Absolute thumbs up, a witty, intelligent and piercing caustic shredding of hate; screw up the papers of cynicism and fill up that bin! If only....brilliance :D "
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Good Day" by Ears2hearyou
- "as per usual there's something utterly different and intoxicating to the way you approach your poetry, the way you collect your thoughts. And even in the manner in which you conceptualise and format your poetry, always adds to the affect; a surreal but not absurd meandering, here I notice the thoughts are more whimisical and perhaps more sullen than some of your past posts. However the manner in which you configure your imaginative language and the eventual outpouring always fascinates and leaves me thinking more about the complexities of life and maybe of language and how you seem to meld the barriers, oozy and gel-like; a gelatinous molding of the poetic labryinth you travel in inside and outside your brain and all the tangeled, sinuous and rhythmic emotions that fuse into being... "
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "i've been picking my nose." by AniDayz
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