wall crawler meets his end...

By DIATRICUS

thrip...

whip thrip whip...

thrip lick lick...


slip slip trip...

slip-trip trick tick

tick tick tick

eclectic thrip slick schtick

thick prick slips lipstick


crick crick crick crick

blip blip flick flip

tip tip tip

thrip trips, slips

slips...

slips...




falls
dead

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© 2009 DIATRICUS
Published on Thursday, June 25, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: bored, were we?

  • sixsixnine On Thursday, June 25, 2009, sixsixnine (476)By person wrote:

    it is funny and somehow I feel like I have been here (there) one too many times :)

  • A former member wrote: squish......[small laugh] but actually for me, it's like the end of a rainstorm .. . love all the 'sound' effectuals. . .clever little thing.

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