Comments by Raven
- "Such a masterfully written sad tale... told in perfectly constructed detail, almost as if you were watching this unfold firsthand. I very much enjoyed this"
Posted by Raven on "live.chat.now" by KittyStryker
- "Aheh... very nicely done. Almost limerickish in the beginning, but it quickly expelled that thought from my head and ended with a bang of its own. "
Posted by Raven on "Donovan Doyle" by Myrrhkuri the fallen one
- "We've had a couple, at least one that I know the specifics of, that have died here. I think we quietly pay respects and gradually forget about them. Their profiles become their own epitaph."
Posted by Raven on "What happens when a dark poet dies?" by Liz
- "This seemed... slightly disjunct in its ways as it flowed. Nevertheless, there's an aching melancholy in the background that left a lump in my throat...especially when the second last stanza hit a chord somewhere deep."
Posted by Raven on "album leaf. [rhapsody]" by Six-Out
- "I particularly like the last sentence in this work. Very concise with its meaning, yet refreshing in delivery"
Posted by Raven on "Seeds of despair" by leluna
- "Quite lovely. The rhyming works especially well in this piece. . . I look forward to reading more... _R"
Posted by Raven on "Sometimes" by leluna
- "This is just glorious. Absolutely wicked in the way the train of thought flows and turns unexpected corners. Thanks for the ride"
Posted by Raven on "alanis song" by doll on the rag
- "Jesus christ... this is so well imaged. I have little left in my brain to provide in this comment space. Just.. original, well-written, and a joy to read. "
Posted by Raven on "Bittersweet" by Crysa
- "Images of torn parchment and ruffled quills dripping in the ink of the soul.... I love the feeling this poem exudes. Shall be reading more of your work "
Posted by Raven on "Transfusion" by Crysa
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