Comments by All Members
- "Everyone makes choices, good ones, bad ones. They hurt people, they make people smile. Either way, whats done is done, and you just have to live on with the consequences, good or bad.
Good write either way."
Posted by Lythodaemil on "Take Me Back" by Aethelwyne
- "Regrets are sometimes the hardest things to deal with. We all have so many "what if's" You did a nice job writing this, it was inspiring."
Posted by Unknown on "Take Me Back" by Aethelwyne
- "I like it, But it ends with me asking
"what would he have done"? A poem closing this question would be good for an ending. Again i like it..."
Posted by Unknown on "Take Me Back" by Aethelwyne
- "Awwww, and so you make a powerful entrance once again. I've missed reading you lately. This is excellent; it brought my heart to a shivering standstill. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "I Am The Fallen" by Aethelwyne
- "You have to let him go. He's hurting you and you're not going to be able to exist if you let him hurt you like this."
Posted by PoeticHellion on "Tomorrow" by Aethelwyne
- "the thing is, he still says he loves me, that he is always thinking about me, and that he wants to get back together, but that he doesnt want a relationship RIGHT NOW."
Posted by Aethelwyne on "Tomorrow" by Aethelwyne
- "Oh my god...I know these feelings...to be reaching out for someone who doesnt reach back...clinging to a memory because there's nothing but air to cling to otherwise...*sighs* This is painfully familiar. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Tomorrow" by Aethelwyne
- ""Unless we are together it isn't real"...*sighs* You've portrayed a feeling I've only dreamed of feeling up til now, and now that I'm feeling it, I'm not too sure I want to be. You're beautiful. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Quicksand" by Aethelwyne
- ""And in no part of you/Is there a trace of me"...I know this feeling...I put up with it for almost a year before realizing that perhaps there was nothing for me to hold on to. Familiarly painful, beautifully portrayed. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Where'd You Go" by Aethelwyne
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