Comments by All Members

"Thank you so much. I loved the rhyme in this too. And, the ending. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Wonders of" by Jonas Robinson

"I greatly enjoyed the unexpected rhyme before-adore and before-whore. Oh and the ending.... Fantastic writing, Jonas! "
Posted by Samael Crowe on "Wonders of" by Jonas Robinson

"Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this. I'm also glad you understood it. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "A game of chess, no less" by Jonas Robinson

"As a chess player I enjoyed such being the central theme and metaphor thank you for sharing "
Posted by Divine hell on "A game of chess, no less" by Jonas Robinson

"Thank you very much for this warm-hearted interpretation. And, thank you for the congrats. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Confusion" by Jonas Robinson

"Sweet write, to me personally it reminds of hardships and the secret battle within wrestling with your own demons of the past. This is awesome congrats on potd "
Posted by Divine hell on "Confusion" by Jonas Robinson

"I'm thankful for your adoration, and profound interpretation. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "A game of chess, no less" by Jonas Robinson

"Haha, good sport Jonas! Had to leave myself a message! Good work though my man."
Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "Please untie me" by Jonas Robinson

"I'll pay you back by also buying the dip."
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Please untie me" by Jonas Robinson

""Uh, yeah... Hey sTr8, don't forget to pickup chips for the party. Oh & you still owe me $5 bucks ya' bastard!""
Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "Please untie me" by Jonas Robinson

"I like the possible constant conflict & struggle of being in a relationship at least that's what I perceive from this and the episodic installments were a nice touch. Keep up the heart writes J-man."
Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "A game of chess, no less" by Jonas Robinson

"Thanks, sTr8. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. Thank you for your profound interpretation. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Wonders of" by Jonas Robinson

"Jonas my man! This is Art and I am thoroughly impressed. This completely enthralls the reader to question every point, every word, every purpose of anything that is ever said or done in Life or a relationship. Why would someone put forth such an effort to woo and cherish, only to leave a devastating wake across your soul? Why would they convey, convince and try to fool us into believing they will be there through that storm only to leave a peering off the docks into the abyss forevermore? This had such depth and content, thank you for sharing this piece of you and all of us. "
Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "Wonders of" by Jonas Robinson

"I'm always glad when someone is appalled by my ending. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Confusion" by Jonas Robinson

"I see you've had the same mornings. ;)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Confusion" by Jonas Robinson

"I'm glad you felt the comedy within the darkness. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Confusion" by Jonas Robinson

"Simple as a rhyme. Glad you liked it! :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Confusion" by Jonas Robinson

"Ink is what I spill. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "I've been eaten" by Jonas Robinson

"Yes, that's what I was going for. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "I've been eaten" by Jonas Robinson

"Yes, they probably do eat forever."
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "I've been eaten" by Jonas Robinson

"I don't know if I'll ever find a way out of darkness. But, thanks for the therapy. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "I've been eaten" by Jonas Robinson

"You make me feel welcome."
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Burn Burn Burn" by Jonas Robinson

"I'm glad to have inspired a new thought for you. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Burn Burn Burn" by Jonas Robinson

"I'm glad you enjoy my ideas. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Burn Burn Burn" by Jonas Robinson

"Still, you're always welcome to comment, even if you're on acid. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Burn Burn Burn" by Jonas Robinson

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