Comments by All Members
- "i've been slacking and i somehow missed this. your works are lalways little gems even when they are as bleak as this. i hope a little light has come your way, sir."
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "Stepping Into Darkness" by gumshoe
- "The style! The form! So simple in words, yet aesthetically pleasing to the eye like a work of art. No! This is art; you made a sculpture out of words, and that is remarkable.
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Posted by Pride Ed on "'';@_.__.__.__." by gumshoe
- "Well this was a little slice of lovely. Eloquent and serene. I enjoyed it muchly ~k"
Posted by Sin on "Baby, here..." by gumshoe
- "Had to come back to this.... as I am sure I will again. ~b"
Posted by blue on "sayll" by gumshoe
- "Under the skin of the night wrapped in silence, that's an awesome line and my favorite line."
Posted by Unknown on "sayll" by gumshoe
- "This is truly deserving of 'Poem of the Day' ....and then some... and the some... ~b"
Posted by blue on "sayll" by gumshoe
- "i come back and read this often. i can never think of anything really worthwhile to comment. it is simply ever beautiful. a scene i wouldnt mind witnessing over and over again. truly one of my favorites."
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "Baby, here..." by gumshoe
- "that day.... when the river may meet the shore... and the bed becomes the sky. How I wait to lay beside her that day... since this world... has washed her far.... too far.... away. Such a wistful and hopeful write... the sentiment stands strong against the violent winds churning this polluted sea. May it be. may it be. thank you... for the beauty you give in the midst of ugly."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Baby, here..." by gumshoe
- "I agree with others your chosen presentation and format gives this something extra rather than taking away. It is beautiful on its own...but now it is uniquely beautiful"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "sayll" by gumshoe
- "These words are so moving that this ship never seems to stop sailing."
Posted by Amaryllis on "sayll" by gumshoe
- "I have come to the conclusion that you are a genius. "
Posted by Despair on "sayll" by gumshoe
- "the union of form and content, that which defies function and transcends purpose to create that which can only be admired from a distance.... this... is this not art. thank you."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "'';@_.__.__.__." by gumshoe
- "Your words are calming and deep and I love every thought. And it is charming what a mysterious member of the Valley you are."
Posted by Alchemist on "Baby, here..." by gumshoe
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