Comments by All Members
- "I love those passing thoughts that still frame life to tell there own story but, represent the inner beauty of it all. I like this a lot. Air pound."
Posted by Phalanx on "ode to a sandwich" by doll on the rag
- "ahhh, the random button, I saw your name and was like, alright, here we go...as usual, you delivered with a flawless glace that seems to follow you where ever your words may go... I've felt this so many times... lovely. :)"
Posted by Malice In Wonderland on "street fighter" by doll on the rag
- "I read the title and thought "this is sure to be interesting". Interesting doesn't do it justice. Like so many before me have stated: it made me want to cry. Despite never having had to go through this myself, your words transported me within that world and made me feel."
Posted by Unknown on "abortion 101" by doll on the rag
- "This is just gorgeous writing... I could feel this, in the very bottom parts of my soul. I could feel each of these stories play out in my mind, clea's especially... "
Posted by Unknown on "alanis song" by doll on the rag
- "truthfully, i do not quite know
what i think i might be waiting for
except that i am rather afraid
that there might be nothing out there
at all .... this is resonating and blindingly true. The what-if's hang in the air here like stars in the very sky. Very stunning, very poignant."
Posted by Unknown on "birthday girl." by doll on the rag
- "I just ate a sandwich last night.and I dont know..I see bloody eyes when I look at a tomato ...the heart and how it keeps us alive..the food that we consume..the lettuce..green grass..weed..the natural beauty in life..fresh and also water..essential for us.. and lettuce is a lot of water..bread the grains we plow and work so hard to make..the labor..money..jobs it creates..that bread of life..to out bread on the table.the cheese..I love CHEESE!..I should write an ode to cheese alone..but now I just rambled..so I love what you did with this write..clever ..wasnt expecting what I read..so Thanks for the share..made me think real hard..not at all.."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "ode to a sandwich" by doll on the rag
- "A little foreshadowing present here..really nice..you give us something the slap us i the face with it later..Great tiny story line..was very effective to give across the simple yet strong message it has..Set me in the scene with convincing visuals.almost read like a page off a short novel yet came off as a poem..Great Job..Thanks for the share."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "southern belle" by doll on the rag
- "I so loved this, one of my best friends is the opposite, he is a guy who wants to be a woman who is with other women. Actually i should say she, because that is how i have always seen her. she is a woman just trapped in the wrong body, and hopefully they will perfect the operations.
It was very hard for her to also admit what she wanted, and kudos to you for doing so.
Hope it all turns out well for you
*hugs galore*"
Posted by Unknown on "the penis i will never have." by doll on the rag
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