Comments by All Members
- "Damn, this hits hard. The cadence is excellent, drawing the reader in and through this writing. And that third stanza from the end, is an absolute gem. Cheers! "
Posted by Adagios on "I Promise" by JensGoneMad
- "Brought to the brink of reconnecting with reality, only to let it slip away again. Truly a sad piece of reality"
Posted by I IS ME on "ColorBlind" by JensGoneMad
- "Interesting piece! I love the imagery, which combined with the changing patterns and cadence of your lines made this wuite complex. Well done! Ciao, T/S "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "ColorBlind" by JensGoneMad
- "Damn I really sympathize with this piece, I was born around 911 and there has been so many tragedies big and small that have happened. Everyone has always told me about what the world was like before all this violence and sickness but for people my age it is all we know. I can feel that sentiment in this. great job. "
Posted by Lil Rorschach on "They Darkened The Windows" by JensGoneMad
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