Comments by All Members
- "...This flows with an impeccable rhythm as I feel myself fall into this schism of your words....There is a hardness here with an almost unperceivable whisper of humanity lost. I loved this poem. I am only saddened by the fact it took me so long to find it. "
Posted by SolApathy on "Self Corrosion " by CryMeaRiver
- "These words are so much more than the sum of their parts. I think many people feel this way every morning... "
Posted by SolApathy on "Vices" by CryMeaRiver
- "Holy fuck that is so good, I felt that one. outstanding write, Just honestly so well crafted and so legible. Very well done here! I hope you find purpose, though it is hypocritical for me to say this, I to row the same boat, anyways I hope it gets better friend. "
Posted by Lil Rorschach on "Existential Insects " by CryMeaRiver
- "I absolutely love this. So close to being destroyed but still have that slight glimmer of hope left to prove you can pull it all back together again."
Posted by fraildove on "Self Corrosion " by CryMeaRiver
- "You really capture mental health and your raw emotion is definitely felt, I have felt that dread. While I can't fully understand your story and your pain, and vice versa know that I see you. I absolutely love the last stanza of rebuilding it is truely like that, sometimes it feels that god just gave me pieces that don't go together. Just know that we are here for you, carry on soldier. As usual live a long happy healthy life friend. "
Posted by Lil Rorschach on "Self Corrosion " by CryMeaRiver
- "That ending is really emotional and filled with pain. I hear you in that we all hear you. This piece is great, I wish that you stay alive. I wish you the best of luck and a long happy life."
Posted by Lil Rorschach on "17 stitches " by CryMeaRiver
- "This was such a powerful piece, from that feeling of the first cigarette to the safety of the blanket. Brilliantly done."
Posted by IamZero on "Vices" by CryMeaRiver
- "I used to have one of those blankets. Not blue. But it was warm when a lot of shit was cold. It seemed to have an unending capacity for tears and with stood the cleching of many bad times. But like most things from my youth it’s gone now. Great write. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "Vices" by CryMeaRiver
- "Roses are the perfect vessel to personify Memento Mori (remember you will die) Its beauty is limitless yet it's life is very limited, great piece. "
Posted by Lil Rorschach on "Rose " by CryMeaRiver
- "I know a lot of people who can relate to this, your minimalist style of writing shows how the emotion is controlled or monitored by others. Really great poem. "
Posted by Lil Rorschach on "Stuck in a Psych Ward " by CryMeaRiver
- "Very accurate portrayal of metal illness! I have never been a patient in a mental hospital, but my grandmother was, and I when I visited her, I think this very accurately captures the feeling of someone going through this! Very well done!"
Posted by Hope in despair on "Stuck in a Psych Ward " by CryMeaRiver
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