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- ""With a heart
so pure, still
believing in magic.
Though her eyes
had witnessed
flagrant acts
from the tragic“
Perhaps wishing for better days and moments in time where reality doesn't allow it to be. Still hope doesn't come in the most conventional manner but sometimes knocks on your door. Maybe those wishes will come true someday who knows?"
Posted by Divine hell on "Falling Stars" by Chelsey Elaine
- "i love the flow of this. i played an imaginary tune to it and it felt like a soft sad song.
beautiful write and so - straight from the heart, a pure heart. "
Posted by kabacha on "Falling Stars" by Chelsey Elaine
- "My only quirk is being a big fan of metaphors & symbolisms. Although there are many well hidden, I'd like even more, especially some for those willing to read a poem more than a dozen of times. I hope that stars and your realization, are a metaphor. Do not answer that.... Magic :)"
Posted by Sorrowful Jester on "Falling Stars" by Chelsey Elaine
- "To know the full truth is dull, there's no magic in that. Magic's not knowing.. magic's wondering about how, what and where. So I get the feeling. I'm afraid to do many thing, because I'm afraid magic is going to fade. I love it."
Posted by Sorrowful Jester on "Falling Stars" by Chelsey Elaine
- "Wow! I could feel the magic so pure and tangible. And then- the abrupt wake up call that tragedy (sometimes- just life is a tragedy in its own) can bring. 🖤"
Posted by FreyaMorrigan on "Falling Stars" by Chelsey Elaine
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