Comments by All Members
- "an absolutely amazing piece...i am completely wow-ed out of my mind. a collaboration of pain and sorrow and tradgedy and strength, wound with intelligence through time, all blown up with the amazing imagery and witty lines...this is absolutly genius art."
Posted by AniDayz on "of a thousand kings" by jaunty pill
- "i love this, the descriptions are original, unique, a kind of flavour to your poetry, and ive nevr used that word before to describe a poem, refreshing to read something like this"
Posted by Anth on "about your beauty" by jaunty pill
- "Mayhaps I worded it wrong. When I meant horrible - I meant not that it was shitty poetry. I meant that the content was degrading and demeaning.. I can't figure out how to express in words what I mean. My apologies."
Posted by Unknown on "nice cunt" by jaunty pill
- "Truly I have been missing out. I'm amazed at your style.. It's so fresh and original and.. eee. You give me goosebumps. Another lovely write."
Posted by Unknown on "of a thousand kings" by jaunty pill
- "Wonderful imagery.. Excellent floetry. "and good-bye clouds aging on us" I had to pause on that line. Lovely, lovely! "
Posted by Unknown on "about your beauty" by jaunty pill
- "This read so effortlessly.. like you were just having a conversation. usually I find myself noticing forced lines and words.. You don't write that way.. It's refreshing.."
Posted by Unknown on "about your beauty" by jaunty pill
- "damn this was brutal in a very warped sense of sexualtiy kinda way...and that last line was just vicious...just damn"
Posted by Sin on "nice cunt" by jaunty pill
- "damn...the imagery is astounding,just the way you pieced this all together...is amazing. theres a true uniquness about your style that i especially love..."
Posted by AniDayz on "about your beauty" by jaunty pill
- "shiattt...this is fucking twisted ....vulgar and lustful....did i say fucking twisted ? !...."
Posted by AniDayz on "nice cunt" by jaunty pill
- "Brilliant piece, truly you have a mastery over this kind of work and i am humbled by your glorious words...truly a wonderful work of art... "
Posted by Solace on "anything less" by jaunty pill
- "damn..i have to admit-this was very effective. im feeling used myself. very intense in all its wording. and quite a merciless ending."
Posted by Twilight on "nice cunt" by jaunty pill
- "intense. your casual brutality is aces. that's what I look for in a good write, brutality, honestym and above all, rawness. The rest will work itself out. This definitely worked out. I don't think it's mean, realistic, if anything. "
Posted by hate_doll on "nice cunt" by jaunty pill
- "Truly a magical piece...the images are eloquently crafted and conveyed with a unique sense of style...my admiration is yours..."
Posted by Solace on "of a thousand kings" by jaunty pill
- "you have a good sense of humor:) i agree sex is exaggerated...evolution seems to be degenerating...like wild kingdom all over again:) elisa"
Posted by elisa on "nice cunt" by jaunty pill
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Thanks " Crimson Queen " for the welcome. I have not had the pleasure to read any of your works yet...I will do that right now. Thanks so much for reading one of my raw writes. "
Posted by jaunty pill on "nice cunt" by jaunty pill
- "beautiful piece; the imagery is wonderfully woven - intricate and unusual yet vividly clear. Gorgeous conclusion in particular, and all-around excellent write."
Posted by purr_verse on "about your beauty" by jaunty pill
- "disturbing, erudite and original write; very compelling and...sort of grittily surreal, if that makes any sense. Welcome to DP - this is very impressive."
Posted by purr_verse on "of a thousand kings" by jaunty pill
- "This was like an impoverished rollercoaster that drops off to darkness at the first dip. The only way I can think to describe it. You write beautifully, your choice of words are magnificent. Even the vulgarity in your other works suffer as eloquent. I am "
Posted by Unknown on "of a thousand kings" by jaunty pill
- "This was so mean. I liked it for the wording and it was delictably vulger, but it ended so...mean."
Posted by Unknown on "nice cunt" by jaunty pill
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