Comments by All Members
- "This is so good!! It leaves you hanging, desperate to know where it's going to go. Beautiful work! ~WithoutWords~"
Posted by Unknown on "Cigarette" by Carmina Gitana
- "or maybe I just read it the day you posted it and forgot about it until I came to read it again today...funny, how 9 days can feel like a long time ago..."
Posted by Unknown on "The Shredded Paper Poem" by Carmina Gitana
- "are you sure you haven't posted this before? I swear, I've read this before..I remember, because I loved it so much the first time I read it..maybe I'm losing my mind.."
Posted by Unknown on "The Shredded Paper Poem" by Carmina Gitana
- "Thanks a lot for the detailed comment :) The reason I didn't mention what was on the paper is that it is far more important what HAPPENED to the paper. Plus, what was on the paper is pretty much what's in the poem."
Posted by Carmina Gitana on "The Shredded Paper Poem" by Carmina Gitana
- "that although you remember everything about the piece of paper, and, therefore, could easy duplicate it...that this was an opportunity that you have lost, because you "sacrificed" it the way you did. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "The Shredded Paper Poem" by Carmina Gitana
- "rawness indeed. i love the line(s) about "attempted suicide in the name of what i stopped writing of" ...i can relate to that more than i care to admit. excellent write"
Posted by Sky Singer on "The Shredded Paper Poem" by Carmina Gitana
- "You do have an incredibly talent at conjuring images in your reader's minds. This was touching with its sincerity and honesty, glee and joy. So very well done! I love your alliteration."
Posted by steuss on "Black Spaghetti" by Carmina Gitana
- "I really really enjoy this poem. It is emotional flow of conciousness is invigorating, filled with saddness and regret, but touched with hope and strength. I'm glad to have read it, Well done!"
Posted by steuss on "The Shredded Paper Poem" by Carmina Gitana
- "When I get a comment on my own piece I feel inclined to read their works. I know for some reason, if they like mine, I should like theirs. Then I stumbled upon this piece n was astounded by your many thoughts and imagery all pieced together so magicaly! I"
Posted by Unknown on "Cigarette" by Carmina Gitana
- "i have heard my good things about this write. and i now i see why. the imagery was awesome...the flow-immmaculate. and over all this was just a captivating piece. damn good..."
Posted by Twilight on "Cigarette" by Carmina Gitana
- "oh wow this was so gorgeous and intriguing yet at the end you cut the rope you'd woven for us to climb up. truly beautiful write. i can't get over the ending. it's superb."
Posted by sIo on "Rhythms of the Sun" by Carmina Gitana
- "this piece is a perfect prelude to the other half of it, and brings it in even more clarity, so much can be lost that you no longer know from where you had come and where home was...adrift and astray, dreaming for what is an evanescence..."
Posted by Solace on "Rhythms of the Sun" by Carmina Gitana
- "Reminds me of a book I read, the wheel of time, the tuathanan or something like that are nomads searching for the song, yet they cannot find it...they are searching for home and yet they are home...as far as i interpret anyway"
Posted by Solace on "Rhythms of the Sun" by Carmina Gitana
- ""but my cigarette
has reached
the end of its patience" Excellent! Love the dialogue and the metaphor of waisted time, unravelling time, wounded time... the layers in 'red tongues'. Bravo!"
Posted by Unknown on "Cigarette" by Carmina Gitana
- "lovely write, as others have said the first 3 stanzas are just wonderful, but the rest of the piece add a personal depth which really opens it up.... awesome write. Thank you."
Posted by Lotophagi on "Galaxy of Letters" by Carmina Gitana
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