Comments by All Members
- "I found this interesting as a sort of back and forth between love and death. The analogies throughout helped keep the flow going in a way that kept me off balance but on track from line to line. Really cool imagery :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "Burn Burn Burn" by Jonas Robinson
- "Sweet write, to me personally it reminds of hardships and the secret battle within wrestling with your own demons of the past. This is awesome congrats on potd "
Posted by Divine hell on "Confusion" by Jonas Robinson
- "I like the possible constant conflict & struggle of being in a relationship at least that's what I perceive from this and the episodic installments were a nice touch. Keep up the heart writes J-man."
Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "A game of chess, no less" by Jonas Robinson
- "Jonas my man! This is Art and I am thoroughly impressed. This completely enthralls the reader to question every point, every word, every purpose of anything that is ever said or done in Life or a relationship. Why would someone put forth such an effort to woo and cherish, only to leave a devastating wake across your soul? Why would they convey, convince and try to fool us into believing they will be there through that storm only to leave a peering off the docks into the abyss forevermore? This had such depth and content, thank you for sharing this piece of you and all of us. "
Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "Wonders of" by Jonas Robinson
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