Comments by All Members
- "Deeply felt. Very moving write. This one will linger on my brain for a while. Thank you for sharing. Excellent. *Much Respect*"Given"*"
Posted by Shaded_Iris on "I Know Differently" by GraySky
- "I can honestly understand that deep stomach feeling of being stuck in the same lashing pain. With nothing to bring you foward.... I also don't what I did that inflicted so much pain upon myself. I just wanted you to know you are a great poet and I can relate."
Posted by Unknown on "Inertia" by GraySky
- "This is really good!! I think my favorite line was "and i feel the chains breaking". However, I was confused about the message of the poem. Also, the poem seems to leap from one subject to another, so you need something in the middle to tie it all together. Sorry for the long comment, hope this helps ^^"
Posted by Unknown on "Inertia" by GraySky
- "So much conveyed, a moment captured wonderfully. Those first two line drew me in completely. -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Bus Stop" by GraySky
- "Beautiful! "Every time you hurt me/at least I am the only thing that matters" I feel that line.. Excellent work!"
Posted by Bluegirl on "Crushed" by GraySky
- "well, I'm still debating whether I want to go to America. I think you made up my mind. I'm not saying whether I am or not though XD! ~Guill"
Posted by Guillotine on "Michigan Avenue" by GraySky
- "wow. i don't feel confused at all by this, seriously. it actually made perfect sense to me. brought back some painful memories, but added some clarity to them. excellent."
Posted by MESUN on "Rehearsal" by GraySky
- "Wonderfully written. Vivid images were conjured through my mind at the sight of your words. -kitty"
Posted by Sticky Kitty on "5 O'Clock" by GraySky
- "*echo*to urban...like i was transported there with the imagery...'but for once in my life, i'm out of reach'~[.love.that line]"
Posted by AniDayz on "Herbstfest" by GraySky
- "*all smiles* i am. the last line was an absolutley perfect closing to this. bRiLliAnt."
Posted by AniDayz on "5 O'Clock" by GraySky
- "this twisted me right up...damn...like opening a million doors ,not knowing which one to choose...there's so much i get from this piece. excellent*"
Posted by AniDayz on "The Aftermath" by GraySky
- "'i don't think i could handle being good much longer...' :0)...i am *no doubtedly* keeping my eye out for your works. you are amaz*/*\ing.."
Posted by AniDayz on "Kelly Something" by GraySky
- "yet another wonderfully brilliant and interesting write. such kick ass lines, it transports me right there out in the street...this whole write encompasses a feeling that has outlined my heart truly...i feel this write deeply."
Posted by AniDayz on "Michigan Avenue" by GraySky
- "*********************************i love it.*******************************"
Posted by AniDayz on "Photons" by GraySky
- "*superb*. a delightful flow and rhythm.wonderfully worded and composed. 'and the one i call you isn't you anymore','i tried to hold on to be something great all the while becoming something i hate'damn. fabulous lines. and i lovelove the ending verse.*"
Posted by AniDayz on "Senioritis" by GraySky
- "Oh my...this was statuesque...quite a lovely wording all the way through...excellent, excellent writing here!!! ****4 stars ~b"
Posted by blue on "Sharp Disappointment" by GraySky
- "wow---this piece penetrates into my entire psyche---way too many places I can go with this one--excellent work---I love the honesty and clarity and subtle vulnerability expressed here"
Posted by Northstar on "Pilsen Village" by GraySky
- "I cant believe there are no comments on this...I think this is a great piece--I especially feel the ending---the line "with bouquets of razors and fireflies" is an awesome use of those images"
Posted by Northstar on "Fool's Gold" by GraySky
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