Pilsen Village

By GraySky

En el bosque,
Creatures of the flowers
Dripping with the sweetness
Of your chocolate voice.
It travels so far to reach me,
But only after a wrong turn.
Those words weren't meant for me,
But still I hungered for them,
So what does it matter?
Let her live in the place you dream,
Where she's forgotten his name already,
The name I depend on,
That brings disaster always...

Forty-eight hours
To escape the torture
With the drums' flamenco
And a Spanish imitation...
But see how he reminds me of you?

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Copyright 2005 GraySky
Published on Sunday, March 13, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Northstar On Saturday, March 19, 2005, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    wow---this piece penetrates into my entire psyche---way too many places I can go with this one--excellent work---I love the honesty and clarity and subtle vulnerability expressed here

  • manywalks On Monday, March 14, 2005, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    My mind will ride around this one for a while, marvelous.

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