Sharp Disappointment

By GraySky

Harmony loves your voice,
Gentle and calm
As I am not.
No, I was never wrong about that.
See how the angels of rose-colored marble
Have answered the music of your prayers?
Who knew that such a melody could reach me?
I was much too young...
No more ready
Than I was in love.

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Copyright 2005 GraySky
Published on Sunday, March 20, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • AniDayz On Monday, March 21, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    ahhh..this is wonderful!! such a thought provoking read, etched with uniqueness and intelligence. *excellent*

  • blue On Sunday, March 20, 2005, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    Oh my...this was statuesque...quite a lovely wording all the way through...excellent, excellent writing here!!! ****4 stars ~b

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