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"direct, straight to the point, original and interesting write. nice work"
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "They told me I paid my debt to society, I laughed." by Dr Benway

"still amazing ~AoD"
Posted by The Crimson Queen on "Lost and found, and lost" by Dr Benway

"Awesome."
Posted by GraySky on "Lost and found, and lost" by Dr Benway

"beautifully writeen."
Posted by AniDayz on "Lost and found, and lost" by Dr Benway

"i like how you just got to the fucking point on this one by the way you were right about the poem of mine you commented on "
Posted by Unknown on "They told me I paid my debt to society, I laughed." by Dr Benway

"i agree with phant-this was an interesting and truly original piece."
Posted by sIo on "They told me I paid my debt to society, I laughed." by Dr Benway

"This is an echo of regret and bitter nostalgia that is clean and to the point.... Excellent work..._Raven"
Posted by Raven on "6am ulcer" by Dr Benway

"prove to him you were better off without him...keep using your pain to write the words of your soul....your truely talented, and you need to realize that...~AoD"
Posted by The Crimson Queen on "6am ulcer" by Dr Benway

"short and sweet...fabulous write! ~AoD"
Posted by The Crimson Queen on "The ten hour itch." by Dr Benway

"If you only knew how much I feel this. Some like to hide their pain under layers of metaphor, some just throw it out and let you have it as is. Yours is a constant mix of both, and I can't get enough."
Posted by Six-Out on "6am ulcer" by Dr Benway

"I feel like I know this, yet it escapes me. I don't know if that's a good thing or not..."
Posted by Six-Out on "The ten hour itch." by Dr Benway

"What a great ode to dysfunctionality. Good read here."
Posted by Gideon Lost on "6am ulcer" by Dr Benway

""Desolation" lol i love that word For some reason i never use though ok anyways this is short but very neat i enjoyed it very much so."
Posted by Unknown on "The ten hour itch." by Dr Benway

"very nice. i like this. "
Posted by sIo on "The plague in the Mirror" by Dr Benway

"Very interesting write... the nonsequitur taste of the last stanza really pulled it together. There's something very harsh and raw about how you write, almost as if you're vomiting up your words; choking on them, but feeling better after for it."
Posted by stormtalk on "They told me I paid my debt to society, I laughed." by Dr Benway

"*nod* Your mind is like a catacomb. I'd pay to find out what lurks beneath the surface, but I'm hoping you'll keep giving us snippets like this."
Posted by Six-Out on "The plague in the Mirror" by Dr Benway

"good to see you can still write during your whole ordeal....great write..."
Posted by The Crimson Queen on "The plague in the Mirror" by Dr Benway

"This was a great poem."
Posted by Unknown on "They told me I paid my debt to society, I laughed." by Dr Benway

"I just re-read this and decided that I am in love with it. ::adds to favorites::"
Posted by call to arms on "They told me I paid my debt to society, I laughed." by Dr Benway

"The last 2 lines are devestating, but they pull this together soooo nicely. This as a wonderfully written piece."
Posted by call to arms on "They told me I paid my debt to society, I laughed." by Dr Benway

"sad....but we make our own decisions in life...nice write. ~A"
Posted by The Crimson Queen on "They told me I paid my debt to society, I laughed." by Dr Benway

"damn that must suck, great write ~Emptyness~"
Posted by Emptyness Inside Me on "They told me I paid my debt to society, I laughed." by Dr Benway

"It's a bitch, ain't it?"
Posted by Six-Out on "They told me I paid my debt to society, I laughed." by Dr Benway

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